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i identify with implied pride
i'm told i confide in the
head of the enemy of the state,
 money grubbing trash taught
no god, under god,
 under fear of relevance plus penalty of deadpan definition.
free as a loud bird in bedroom communities
raised on emotional hypochondria, caffeine, and
you can't say that word and
you can't blame that man.

i identify with implied insincerity
color me confused when white is red
in the blue decade my sun tan quit
burning the brown man.
offense or no offense i only
relate to my forefathers through egocentricity
and it figures its implied i
identify with every color i insult,
the truest white stereotype is based
in irony.

staight faced in a town full of
curvy roads
i am bound to get lost in some
culture cul de sac
without the money to live somewhere
i'm not
supposed to feel sorry
so i identify with whats implied silently
because my words are better spent on
sharing something someone else isnt
already spray painting to my social walls.





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On Monday October 8th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
I would say nice work other than the thought that you are not the orginal artist, So do you often copy other people(s) work as your own?


On Tuesday October 23rd, 2007, carlosjackal (1726) writes:
Hehe..this coming from the person who's had 5 comments removed.


On Monday October 8th, 2007, Sharon Rose (663) writes:
back it up with a citation, please.


On Monday October 8th, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
oh all the time man. you should maybe report me to DarkPoet so i can get banned for all the crazy things i plagiarize


On Monday October 8th, 2007, Instant Insanity (735) writes:
PLAGARIZER!! Your going to jail! Or Hell, which ever one comes first. ][ ][


On Monday October 8th, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
you really caught me red handed here, so, i mean, jeez. oh right. who did i copy again?


On Monday October 8th, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
seems like no one. I guess you should get fucked or something then.


On Monday October 8th, 2007, glasshouse (780) writes:
*applauds* unfounded, much?


On Sunday October 7th, 2007, Instant Insanity (735) writes:
"identify with implied insincerity" nicely said ][ ][


On Saturday September 29th, 2007, Lydia Jade (784) writes:
Very fast pace, enoyable to read in all its ironic factual relatability. Easy enough to be understood by anyone who isn't a machine...In one way or another. _In jade we trust_ Much love.


On Friday September 21st, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1763) writes:
I dont know what to comment. But I can tell you that I have read this ten times allready.


On Friday September 21st, 2007, Evil (547) writes:
grasping for strings.


On Thursday September 20th, 2007, Preacher X (59) writes:
It's a bit hard to follow but that could be the exhaustion. Regardless you captured alot of intrinsic points of todays seeming society. Good write.


On Wednesday September 19th, 2007, sIo (872) writes:
honestly, i don't like this at all.


On Wednesday September 19th, 2007, glasshouse (780) writes:
I really love the way this came out. It takes a couple reads, I stumble through the first few. But hidden under the surface is a great message. Well put. I especially like the last stanza. You've done it. Good luck. --Jes


On Wednesday September 19th, 2007, Alanarchy (1704) writes:
Cols right. There's something fresh in the way you speak the words. "Free as a loud bird in bedroom communities" Awesome.


On Wednesday September 19th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
an excellent topical allusion to the cultures that parameter us...the perimeters of ignorance and distrust; the colour-bound stereotypes and the state of control...worded in a unique and intelliget fashion, a diamond in the ruff


On Wednesday September 19th, 2007, carlosjackal (1726) writes:
*awe-struck*



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