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"A Bothersome Itch" by Lotophagi

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I have a
bothersome itch
it’s such an
othersome bitch
that squeaks and squirms
puts a hand to her perm
and squalls like a squirrel
in dire straits pounded under an estate.

it breathes out
its loathsome air
and I feel compelled to swear
that really all that dog is

is just

an oathsome liar.



© 2006 Lotophagi

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On Wednesday November 15th, 2006, mywristshurt (525) writes:
well it was short.. i didnt really get the jist of it, but it was okay


On Monday May 29th, 2006, Ainsof (1803) writes:
excellent fun... love the strategic use of language... and the suggested rodent and wormlike qualities of this particular 'itch' are in exquisite company... very very nice last line


On Saturday May 27th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:
brilliant wordplay.. it shows amazingly deliberate sense, and this little itchy tick makes a lasting impact.


On Saturday May 27th, 2006, Err0r (579) writes:
So very clever and eloquent, I expected nothing less from you. Lovely.


On Wednesday May 24th, 2006, AniDayz (1284) writes:
clever indeed...you've fully mastered such an intense word.play, and it all flows so wittingly wonderfully.


On Sunday May 21st, 2006, Alanarchy (1616) writes:
Agreeing with june. The swinging axe rhyme just hooked me. Great concept. Pimp-elicious.


On Sunday May 21st, 2006, Guillotine (228) writes:
Welcome back! And my dear, what a way to do it. Clever, witty and wonderful. :) ~Guill


On Saturday May 20th, 2006, evolve (2231) writes:
Clever rhyme scheme that encapsulates my entirety to be so brief in length. This will be with me for a while.. as each lie that has been told to me is notched in the bedpost of my spine. Excellence as expected, Cara. I've missed you, dear.


On Saturday May 20th, 2006, evolve (2231) writes:
hahaha. I just can't get over this.



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