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"From Across the Room(I see a beautiful girl)" by Draven

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From across the room I see a beauty
just staring at the wall
her radiance amazes me
and I can't stop staring
Its as if the goddess Aphrodite
sent her to this desolite town
to show me what true beauty is
I wish to speak to her
and let her know how i feel
but everytime I get around her
I'm utterly speechless
and no words seem to form
no matter how hard I try
I guess I'm just destined only to be
forever watching from across the room



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On Thursday October 4th, 2007, Rone4611 (156) writes:
act confident. even if you're not. thats all that's truely required to get girls. no offence, because allusions are awesome - but i'm so so so so so sick of mythological references. but that's just me. good write


On Sunday February 13th, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:
heart wrenching is right indeed. lovely write


On Sunday February 13th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:
awww...this is simply sweet as hell..i loved it!


On Sunday February 13th, 2005, frozen (747) writes:
that was beautiful heart wrenching and heart felt.



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