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"Loss" by Draven

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Why do we hold things near?
when we know they are only going to dissappear
this world is full of false pretences
numbing all of our senses
The agony of loss is too much to bear
if only we could find someone to share
the pain of regret is all to simular
as if we could go so far
to find love again
and take away the pain
is something that cannot be done
because we are forever destined to be one
alone with no one there
all alone with our dispare



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On Tuesday October 23rd, 2007, Dark_Specter (17) writes:
YESSUM


On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (748) writes:
beautifully painful write. And nobody is destined to be alone we all have our soul mate some where out there dont give up someone will come along and show you differently.


On Monday November 29th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
I love this. It speaks so loudly to me. Great work!


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Storm (185) writes:
"There can only be One", too bad that but hey it made a hell of a poem!


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was wonderfully done...and i will not get into the despair thing....;)


On Monday November 29th, 2004, Draven (51) writes:
Thanks Zhee


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (135) writes:
Well I like it! It’s great I love you rhyme scheme! Beautifully written!


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (11) writes:
Nice poem, I like the ryhme scheme, it holds me bound. But you spelt dispair "dispare" haha.


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
and you spelt despair, dispair :)


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
HA HA HA! that's cool


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Draven (51) writes:
awsome


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Storm (185) writes:
muahaha...


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, Draven (51) writes:
close enough



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