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all the black rain falling
all the demons calling
nobody wants me to be alive
all of them want me to die
i dont have any real friends
i dont have a real family
all this black rain is falling
death is always calling
i dont want to be alive
all i want to do is die
my friends wont care
neither will my family
the black rain still is falling
but nobody is calling
i'm lying on the cold wet around
nobody will ever find me
i'm no longer on the run


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On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:
that seems to be my life in a nutshell that was really great and im glad that im not the only one


On Sunday December 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
This is a very real feeling of invisibleness, I can understand the way you felt when creating this masterpiece, Maddy x


On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
"nobody will ever find me i'm no longer on the run" ~ this is just awesome . . i am voiceless, void. Every line was simply divine. .dripping in raindrop glitterings . . freezing on my eyelashes. You have tugged at my heart . . exceptional. Rose


On Monday November 22nd, 2004, void (49) writes:
thnk u much


On Sunday November 7th, 2004, Savannah (285) writes:
AWESOME!! I loved it


On Sunday November 7th, 2004, A Broken Soul (102) writes:
HOLY F*ck! that's EXACTLY what i'm feeling right now. very good. very good poem. ^Autumn^


On Sunday November 7th, 2004, Rone4611 (156) writes:
Embrassed the emotion all of us feel from time to time. Very good.



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