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my last day

i feel like I'm dying now
i don't know why I'm crying now
the wilted rose falls on the floor
as my lover slams the door
i wish i new just how he feels
i wish he knew just how to heal
i have way too many scars
that have never gone away
i have lost my "shining star"
so this is my last living day

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On Friday March 23rd, 2007, Enigma (124) writes:

Thats very sad, its short and good to..AwSOMe

On Friday March 4th, 2005, An Expired Member (2) writes:

UMMM...QUESTION: WOULD THIS HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH YOUR" JACK"?

On Friday December 10th, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

Keep it up with these emotional pieces! I like the "shining star" ;) I'm glad you realize the power of your words...it really shows through in your work. ~Faerie~

On Friday November 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

wow...very powerful...

On Saturday October 30th, 2004, Sex Slave (98) writes:

Sad And Good Very butiful

On Saturday October 30th, 2004, void (49) writes:

thnx

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