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"lacrimal lakes." by Saint Sentient

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shove.deep: this pen into my temple.
break skin- and drive away the pain. one line
at a time.

one time- line by line. I'd make a point and multiply it by five
to force this fist into the the earth-
paint a fracture with my blood and measure the depth
of the world's sorrow in those eyes.

like walking barefoot- on melting sand.
when the glass is never thick enough. fearing falling.
but jumping all the same.
hoping. just praying
that a shard won't puncture my throat when I tumble.

fumbling for my keys.
this downpour is disheartening.

I need to sleep.



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On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, dying angel (1351) writes:
"I'd make a point and multiply it by five to force this fist into the the earth" i'm pretty sure the double "the" was a mistake, but it really stuck out to me in that sentence. like a tremble, or that hesitation before taking another step.


On Wednesday May 17th, 2006, Astra Dei (645) writes:
Amazing. I am loving the sand/glass metephore there. The title really seems to set the stage. "Lacrimal Lakes" and its punctuated when you speak of the "disheartening downpour" what a "tear jerker"! -Natelle


On Monday May 15th, 2006, Ainsof (1803) writes:
haha... exquisite... there is a suggested context here it seems, with the keys, and yet the first stanza seems outside that context... intriguing


On Monday October 3rd, 2005, ApathysKiss (464) writes:
'paint a fracture with my blood and measure the depth of the world's sorrow in those eyes.' that second stanza is rather vivid...a gaping avante-garde...


On Monday October 3rd, 2005, ApathysKiss (464) writes:
one word misspelled 'barefoot' (thought this deserved perfection) a solitary, seemingly dejected piece...graphically accomplished and blunty simplified by that last line. intriguing work. ~m~


On Monday October 3rd, 2005, Sentient Ignorance (35) writes:
beautiful, it makes my blood sing.



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