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cubicle kingdom

people
aheadbehind
allbore!bore!bore!
alas, the dark corner
is too bright
to conceal hopelessly carved
pupils
to rivale the king’s –
rimmed by crows feet
carved by
desperate dispair
disgraced
by
degenerated
ideas built
of
panic & dandilions.

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On Saturday September 17th, 2005, Marek (145) writes:

Well adjectives like "hopelessly" generally give a dark/depressed feel. I really liked the imagery I have seen the crows feet carved by nights and days spent in escape I love the contrast and connotation of the final word, "dandelions"

On Saturday August 6th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

this was a really interesting read though i wonder at the deeper meaning of it... it had a depressed/dark feel but i couldn't say why exactly

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