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Quitters Never Win

one wide gauge
hipped at the join
viciously packed
boxed flip-top coffins

one wide gauge
cyclically vanishing zippos
amid end-table turf wars
lemon pepsi redbulls

one wide gauge
cellophane cat’s cradle
modishly wound
sturgeon general’s EULA.

one wide gauge
eluded existential attentions
poisoned abysmal inhalation
sanctioned lonely exultation

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On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, capt_funguy (993) writes:

i read this forward three times and backwards four .. it made me do that .... i owed it that .. im glad this happened - thankyou very much ... funguy

On Sunday May 8th, 2005, Choronzon (233) writes:

This is a crazy read. I loved it, nice work.

On Sunday May 8th, 2005, darkdesires (175) writes:

Wow this is just beyond my words... the last verse is just perfection... i love it.

On Sunday May 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (7) writes:

This is very good.....stainless alienation, annit just?

On Sunday May 8th, 2005, suicideseason (2141) writes:

Oh,yes...relentless and wild ...razor sharp stainless steel slicing mercilessly.Thank you.

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