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feelings
about you
about me
about them,
voicing concern
for
not you
only them
only me,
right?

personal regret
secrets quietly revealed
words slammed together
blaming 'selves:
not your
not my
just their,
right?

addresses randomly pointed
towards eyes who were
caring
empathetic
fearful
of
who i am
how i feel
when i feel
where i feel,
right?

my voices are concerned
screaming fruitless antiwar slogans
ripped in two by personal devastation
shouting against molestor's explosions
falling
upon
unconcerned deaf
ears

eyes
never witness to murder
godlessness
soul-stealing,
right?

them@world.com read the
cry claiming no
accusation
finger pointing
oh! despairing world gone awry!

emails read
in
red madness
hiding
behind
sickeningly forced poems
concerning nothing
except
a severe concern for your feelings.




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On Monday December 27th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:
Words written well need no critique


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
and the following, and the previous , just the whole thing was wonderful. I think I might just have to add you to my favorites list, nice work


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
"my voices are concerned screaming fruitless antiwar slogans ripped in two by personal devastation shouting against molestor's explosions" -must quote this whole thing, I loved this line..


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Marek (145) writes:
So you don't know when you wrote this eh? Very thought provoking stuff. I suppose then that this has to do mostly with futility (?) Anywho, good read, very very thought provoking. Thanks for the heads up.


On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:
nice


On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:
Wow. I will be keeping an eye on you. Very nice indeed.



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