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Tainted kisses on your mouth,
you lick them up,
as if they give you sustanance.
Give them up to me, paint me black,
with every embrace,
You kill me softly with all your lies....

This love is heading south,
it cuts me up,
as if it was a living thing all its own.
Take it from me, because I want more,
with every word,
I die just a little more inside....

Make it better, make it right,
turn this around tonight,
lets pretend we've never met.
You never wiped away the blood,
With every look,
you never said you wanted it all again....


{Chorus}
Take it away, or give it all,
you never make up your mind,
and you put me through hell.
I'm bleeding away.
Bleeding away...


its only the first draft, I think it could still use some work but i have a melody in my head and an idea that went with it. so here it is.



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On Wednesday July 4th, 2007, Unforgotten (153) writes:
Make sure you post your revisions! I like it a lot. Especially the third verse flows well



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