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"Southbound Lanes and Guitar Strings" by Sin

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As of late Ive been trailing behind your guitar strings darling
Plucking your left over notes out of the air like smiles
And as of late Ive been traveling every southbound road I see
Hoping that it leads its way back to you

But my veins make a terrible map
Of criss crossing emotions to my heart
Where youve wrapped your misty mountain voice around tight
and I cant seem to shake those sweet silken chords
(Not that I would want to even if I could)

But all the hazy stares you send in my direction
Are lost on blue skies instead of my eyes
And its a hard place to be stuck between heartache and envy

If I was that guitar that you strum so skillfully
With fingers hovering and teasing harmony and vibrations
I would sing you a melody that matched your soul
And melted into the magnolia breezes

We would make beautiful music together
With your rough fingertips and my hollow bones

But as of late ive been trailing behind your guitar strings darling
Chasing those little left over notes and hiding them in my pocket
Waiting for southbound smiles to cover the miles
And take me home to you

Baby, I want to come home to you




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On Thursday May 15th, 2008, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
Come back :(


On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:
Beautiful piece! I love the lines, "If I was that guitar that you strum so skillfully With fingers hovering and teasing harmony and vibrations I would sing you a melody that matched your soul...". Ciao, T/S


On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, glasshouse (812) writes:
I don't know how I missed this. Absolutely priceless. Great flow, great words, and of course your great ability to express great emotion. Never understated and never melodramatic. You are, I must believe, perfect. Lovely. --Jes


On Sunday July 15th, 2007, Alanarchy (1611) writes:
I still have this tacked up on my wall. I read it at least once a day, it reminds me that I'm loved by someone more beautiful then even these words. And, I love you too.


On Tuesday May 29th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:
This was of the up most beauty and deserves quite the praise! The title drew me in and the words did not let go! There is a very effective use of light and shade here! It evoked emotions long since deceased! Great Write! \Billy/


On Saturday May 19th, 2007, Doc (190) writes:
I knew my southbound musical charm would get to you sometime


On Friday December 28th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
pst where the heck are you sonny?


On Sunday May 20th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
oh yes i could only fight it for so long ;)


On Wednesday May 16th, 2007, mysticventures (554) writes:
such love !! and expressed so delicately and beautifully - well written work :)


On Saturday May 12th, 2007, Alanarchy (1611) writes:
"But all the hazy stars you send in my direction Are lost on blue skies instead of my eyes" *Heart breaks like an old worn string* You are so very beautiful, kristykat. ;)


On Saturday May 12th, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:
take me home... country roads.. this here's a country song! *grabs boots and ten gallon hat* yee haw! i like this a lot kristy


On Saturday May 12th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (335) writes:
Beautiful, has that certain flare to it that makes it stand out among other poems. Bravo! ~T


On Friday May 11th, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
:) Perfecto! The sentiment and yearning in this were expressed magnificently. Loved it! -Carl


On Monday May 21st, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
Still love it!! -Carl


On Friday May 11th, 2007, Army Barbie (501) writes:
This was so beautiful, Kristy...so beautiful.


On Friday May 11th, 2007, An Expired Member (13) writes:
Music is the best emotion


On Friday May 11th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:
I loved this. The ending was so sincere. (I hope I spelled that right) Well done!



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