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Water born

oceans collect in my veins
the ebb and flow of eternity tucked inside a kiss
the moon, a bitter mistress
that no longer holds sway over these tides
crumbles in an eclipse of starbursts
as russet hues drift
across breaking cresents of midnight
clouds collecting upon my lashes
as sand fingers catch foamy waves
before releasing their turbulance
back into the night
this gush of free flowing emotion
leaves me empty
and i settle back into the calm
of this hushed serenity

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On Thursday May 15th, 2008, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

Come back :(

On Wednesday July 18th, 2007, jack paper (212) writes:

beautiful, i really love this, better with every read

On Sunday June 17th, 2007, Tonights Decision (167) writes:

in such rivers.. waitig for the tides.. this was so easy to lose oneself in... so easy..

On Wednesday May 16th, 2007, mysticventures (546) writes:

vivid beauty

On Sunday April 15th, 2007, island warrior (303) writes:

Wonderful as always.

On Thursday April 12th, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:

very nice...took me to a place far far away.

On Thursday April 12th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:

really awesome

On Tuesday April 10th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:

this is splendid. a washed feeling of white overtures, with a blush of radiant serenity. beautiful.

On Monday April 9th, 2007, raskal (199) writes:

this poem is wonderful. love the analogy. the first four lines (for me) in particular are a dream..i would bookmark if it wasn't for the quota thingy .. bravo!

On Monday April 9th, 2007, Sin (1641) writes:

thank you thats quite a compliment :)

On Monday April 9th, 2007, jack paper (212) writes:

you wash the dirt and darkness from long-lost-images in my mind and you give them life and brush them beautiful again... this is imbued with passion

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Mylissa (1090) writes:

what a trip..I feel your words with beauty that presses against your lips. remarkable.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Dark_Child (67) writes:

i have to agree with Aunty, this did sound pretty orgasmic..."this gush of free flowing emotion leaves me empty.." That explains how it feels....beautiful write.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Lynaes (1129) writes:

hushed serenity... so, so beautiful. there are always phrases that stick in my mind in your poetry, you just put things across so eloquently.. Stunning, as you are. :)

On Friday April 6th, 2007, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

Perfect! I agree with Cloud, you should be published.

On Friday April 6th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:

emotionally epic. weaving words like webs, maybe you should publish?

On Friday April 6th, 2007, Alanarchy (1616) writes:

"Clouds collecting upon my lashes" I really got caught up in that line. Not sure why. I loved the images it, really this whole thing, brings out. Hey, all I can do is echo the hatter, and agree with mrs depressant. Beautiful, sugar.

On Friday April 6th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

this was nice and spiritually enhancing, with a tide like ebb and flow that I could just spend some forgotten time in forgetting everything and just relaxing...lush lovely lady....nice one

On Thursday April 5th, 2007, Nuri (193) writes:

Yes, I agree. Orgasmic tempest! 'oceans collect in my veins' Mmm powerful. Thank you for sharing.

On Thursday April 5th, 2007, blue (1754) writes:

rawr! cook some more. lady.

On Thursday April 5th, 2007, blue (1754) writes:

damn, i just rhymed

On Thursday April 5th, 2007, Astra Dei (645) writes:

this is probably your best that ive read. Nicely done

On Thursday April 5th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (717) writes:

Ahhhh, sounds orgasmic ;)

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