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ghosts
ghosts are all i see

sallow faces seeping sadness
from empty shells lying in wait
for the wind
to breathe life back into dull eyes

flesh clinging to hollow bones
as worms wriggle under cranial headdresses
faking brainwaves in clustered masses

fetid words spewing from withdrawn lips
as gums recede to escape their twisted smiles

riddled hearts seeking to obtain passion
and hold it in broken vessels
but skeletal fingers only collect cobwebs
as they rot from the inside out

stumbling with disjointed steps
to an insignificant location
mindlessly grinding away
only to crumble
without the necessary lucrative lubrication
of satisfaction

a barren shore of bleached bone awaits
with nothing but miles of empty sand to recieve them







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On Thursday May 15th, 2008, carlosjackal (1653) writes:
Come back :(


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:
This was actually very relaxing to me, It feels like "shame, but these are the perils" and i am just floating debris. I really do enjoy your style. it reads comfortably.


On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, RepulsiveAttraction (109) writes:
Wonderful imagery, the title suits it perfectly. great write. :D


On Friday April 13th, 2007, carlosjackal (1653) writes:
Magic!! What images you conjure and the tone, mood and atmosphere you created were fantastically fantastical and beautifully eerie. :)


On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, Lynaes (1129) writes:
I have to agree with Mikeydoodle... this was utterly shudderlicious.. an amazing and different piece of art from you.. I think no matter what you write about, it's beautiful. :)


On Sunday April 1st, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
What a way to end a poem. Those last two lines made me shudder.


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Winter Born (168) writes:
I would comment, but hatter beat me to it and stated my comment better than i could have....Damn you hatter!


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, TheProphetUntold (365) writes:
This reaks of rot and filth. Definately not something I am used to when I look at the author. But still insanely satisfying. The final 3 stanzas are awesome. Forgive my slightly inebriated state, but this fucking rocked my shit! +tpu+


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Starrburry Gayzur (72) writes:
"Skeletal fingers only collect cobwebs" was my favorite line! Love, luv, love.


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Loketha Angel (158) writes:
Kristy, youa re too girly... Just kidding my dear. This was morbidly beautiful, I loved it in every aspect. Great write.


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Sin (1637) writes:
btw this was for all those giving me a hard time about being too girlie and mushy :P so suck on that for a moment


On Sunday April 1st, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
unh! :D


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, raskal (198) writes:
great title -and i love anything to do with ghostly pirate shipwrecks -makes for such wicked imagery and fun...excellent...oh and echos shoot me -that hat man covers all the clever points!!


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, stormtalk (909) writes:
Wonderful finish.


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
gives me great pleasure to comment upon this first; it has some aliterative madness in it.....lubrication line was a difficult swallow though *no jokes thank you Kristy*, this is my kind of poem....


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
ghostly, almost savage wih some sumptuous diction and the imagery is very enthralling and the poem as a whole does itself justice Kristy, something darker and more menacing from you


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
and that was a treat to behold for me


On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
he alwoys says what i want to say, damn you hatter and your inate ability to read my thoughts



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