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my precious soldier
head held high
all broken inside
as you bare the burden
of the world on your back

your smiles
never reach your haunted eyes
and you lay
all your scars out like medals
before me
each one holding a memory
of a battle won and lost

you see yourself as damaged
all tainted and unclean
but with those
war weathered hands
you hold
my bleeding heart so tenderly

while all those
cracks in your armor
are held together by pride
only the night sees your tears
and all those ghosts
you try to hide

you payed your pennance
in full
with all your pain
so ill wash your bloody hands clean
and caress all your old wounds
that still bleed

my eyes will only hold love
as they look upon you
because your own lonely sentence
is all the judgement you need

ill pray salvation finds you
because all the battles youve fought
arent half as brutal
as the wars you wage against yourself

so my precious soldier
when you grow weary of fighting
come seek the shelter of my arms
and lay your head upon my breast
ill whisper to you of love
and lay all your demons to rest



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On Monday February 11th, 2008, Circe Avalon (184) writes:
This poem is the best by far of soldier poems. Truly a masterpiece. Hold your head up high, you nailed the nail on the head.


On Monday February 11th, 2008, totaltrip (43) writes:
nice. very nice. i like this a lot.


On Friday December 28th, 2007, italianbella (303) writes:
your words touch the heart and soul this was beautiful


On Sunday July 22nd, 2007, Alanarchy (1641) writes:
You. Just you. You radiate such a sensual tenderness.... so expressively beautiful.


On Monday July 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (34) writes:
this hurt me to read, and yet felt so good. wonderful words I wish someone would say to me...


On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Ainsof (1738) writes:
a triumphant tribute, tender and so classically expressed... your rhyme polishes your reason, and both lift my spirits and grant hope in humanity... gorgeous, love!


On Sunday July 30th, 2006, veingo (569) writes:
Inhale.... hold.... And.... Ahhhhhh! What a wonderful feeling it must be, to have these things said to you. ^V^


On Monday June 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (1) writes:
This is a beautiful poem, I have a friend who you perfectly just described.


On Saturday October 22nd, 2005, Army Barbie (499) writes:
Gracious. This is so...painfully lovely. It hurt to read this, and will hurt again when I re-read it.


On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, Lab Rat (327) writes:
.... this still does it...


On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, An Expired Member (7) writes:
As men, we've two choices of death! Either on our feet and screaming, or in her arms while dreaming! Hmmm...tough choice? Armour's so futile from the inside..annit just!


On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:
honorary, beautiful, and heartfelt dedication... you acknowledge their struggle and pain as lovingly and clearly as anyone who loves a soldier can in this piece... 1, Seth


On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, serotonin lost (223) writes:
i loved this although i can't find the words to expess how much.


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Leigh (25) writes:
knowing 1st hand how brutal those memories are to the soldier & their loved ones...truly beautiful & giving


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, NikesRain (1504) writes:
beautiful is not stong enough of a word for this...it goes beyond that into something all encompassing in truth beauty sincerity and compassion wrapped in perfection...breathless


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Ophelia (305) writes:
soldier of time unkown be it ancient or present the heart weeps for...wonderful.....O


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, DarkDruidess (205) writes:
beautiful...utterly...


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Lab Rat (327) writes:
i've never shed tears to poetry before now.


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, manunkind (89) writes:
wow, i was totally prepared to be dissapointed! dark poetry is really dissapointing me lately. YOU, however, DO NOT!! wonderful write!


On Friday May 20th, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:
Good piece - I especially like the lines "all the battles youve fought arent half as brutal as the wars you wage against yourself" Ciao, T/S


On Friday May 20th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:
This was haunting and sweet at the same time. Very sad but very nicely written. ~Ryan


On Friday May 20th, 2005, Serenity (600) writes:
Agreed! :)



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