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 let me bare your pain tonight
and take away your tears
because the sadness in your eyes
weighs heavy on my soul

~*~

see yourself through my eyes
and know your worth

~*~

let me bestow upon you
the compassion that our god lacks
give you wings
so you can soar
and return to the sky where you belong

~*~

ill carry your cross
to ease your heavy burden
if youd only let me

~*~

so let go of all those past tragedies
and have faith in me


~*~

my love may be flawed
but it will never falter
and i feel your every injury as if it were my own
and every tear you cry
is multiplied in my eyes a hundred times over
and every time your broken heart beats in pain
another of my scars cracks open

~*~

so let your blood be not shed
and cry no more

~*~

let me bare your pain
after all
what are friends for

~*~




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On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
I know the feelings. You're an angel.


On Monday March 19th, 2007, carlosjackal (1653) writes:
*melts* This was so good I was checking to make sure you weren't plagiarising *melts again*


On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, jack paper (211) writes:
one of my favorite works of yours


On Monday January 22nd, 2007, tangeled (526) writes:
wow. i feel almost as if you stole the words from my mind on this one. this is beautiful.


On Tuesday November 28th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:
very penetrating!!! i love it!!


On Monday October 10th, 2005, Bridge (353) writes:
this is awesome...sadly, i could never write like this...


On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, Thorn (440) writes:
Oh, that is soo precious. I love this poem.


On Monday June 6th, 2005, Trapped_with_Insanity (131) writes:
I read the words, but looked for more...and whe I found nothing I realized that there was nothing more to be said. Thank you for opening my eyes...Prehaps maybe one day those words will pass my own lips...-Diviana


On Monday May 30th, 2005, Serenity (600) writes:
Perfection. Everyone should read this and understand this.


On Sunday May 29th, 2005, Labitina (45) writes:
This is perfect, you took the words strait from me, I feel the same way about someone, this was beautiful~ Christina


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:
Wow this is amazing. A friend of mine has kind of said this very thing to me. Beautiful write. wonderful job. ~Unlucky


On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, Silent Assassin (123) writes:
Oh how I would love to be able to bare the pain of so many I care about. I truly know of you feel and you expressed it way better than I ever could. This was beautiful. -Dan


On Saturday April 9th, 2005, island warrior (303) writes:
Almost too beautiful to be true. Lovely write


On Friday April 8th, 2005, darkleprechaun (69) writes:
wish i had a friend like that.... but would wish the bearing of my pain on no man or woman... for it's almost too much for me.... guess that's why i have not such friends.... dave thanx for the write kristy i truely enjoyed it


On Friday April 8th, 2005, Lab Rat (326) writes:
*hugs ya tight* luv ya kristy



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