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"And how will your night dances lose themselves
--in mathematics?" -- S.Plath



you still burn me,
you pinch my veins
with the skepticism that
so easily tears out of your heart..

--like the walls that surround you were
already caving in--

and I am told, over the twisted
lines of this solemn telephone
that utopia is unreachable,
but that I'll always touch
only to be crushed..

perhaps emptiness should fill me,
and pearl white dresses should slip
off of my body.
revealed, revealing..
I am the crushed pills.
show me all you are.

never shun, never shun

and defeated bed sheets hang
down from waxy candles,
the waxy candles on your wall.

your vines remind me of my childhood..

-I'll never know why you are not here-

"of thee I sing, tied to a string"



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On Monday January 10th, 2005, K_Love (693) writes:
I know I've commented on this before but I think you deserve better. This was an amazing piece. The first three stanza hit me hard. "that utopia is unreachable, but that I'll always touch only to be crushed.." Inspiring write, I loved every word.


On Saturday January 1st, 2005, An Expired Member (22) writes:
Good write.


On Friday December 24th, 2004, Rone4611 (157) writes:
I just re-read it and want to comment again haha, i must say, i really can relate to this feeilng and it brings memories rushing back, utopia cant be reached... very sexy


On Saturday November 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (61) writes:
amazing i love everything you write. you always blow my mind.


On Friday November 26th, 2004, blue (1754) writes:
oh, you make me dizzy~~~swoon, swoon...


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was amazing... a truly beautiful piece of work!


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Rone4611 (157) writes:
lol, im a fan now! lol. this and gleaming of insects are frigging awesome!


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Six-Out (1826) writes:
I've liked some of yours, I've not liked some of yours...but this left me with my jaw on the floor...beautiful has to be the best way to describe it.


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, K_Love (693) writes:
Very unique, made me think and feel like I was in a fantasy for some reason. Beautiful write. :)


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (29) writes:
nothing short of exquisite. Beautiful! Sarah


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, urbanhumility (1352) writes:
fantastic..........steeped in longing.....tasty dark........urban


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, JustBnMe (60) writes:
uniquely twisted, i love the flow


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
-profound. This is wonderful. ~ Rose.


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
___wow. "perhaps emptiness should fill me, and pearl white dresses should slip off of my body. revealed, revealing.. I am the crushed pills. show me all you are." ~ your work is too beautiful sometimes; too unbearably exquisite. Your talent is profoun



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