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The Gleam Of Insects

Glowing mouths of lightbugs...
fall of sight,
and time..
seeing the world as an
eclipse..
(fully tongued with sharp teeth)
Scratch at the walls,
Scratched At The Walls..
walls of bronze,
wilted spoons and silver flowers..
glisten in the sun.
(moonlight, midnight)
Redemption,
Oh purify..(cleanse...cleanse)
Lean in to me, and Smile of Sane.
Love in the remembrance of what used to be..
oh white light,
you fill my dazed skies..
you fill me with lilies,
and rocks of glitter.
to sink me beautifully..
when i flow with the (rhythm) of your
heartbeat..
slowing..slowed...slow..

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On Thursday October 4th, 2007, Rone4611 (157) writes:

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

I agree with Rone, very intoxicating. This had a very soothing feel to it, excellent work:) ~Ryan

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Rone4611 (157) writes:

intoxicatingly pretty, with just a touch of mystery and an awesome ending. Beautiful.

On Monday October 4th, 2004, DoctorAsh (508) writes:

Hmm, i love this style you've developed into here - It has an upperlevel of intelligence behind it. Tricking the reader around direct feeling - leaving it slightly mysterious . Wonderful expression. [D&A]

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, FallenFaith (47) writes:

Do i smell,(sniff,sniff) talent?

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

very interesting style you have...picture i havent seen before;i could say rarities...but that would sound kiss ass...pretty damn good.

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, ElegantKiss (402) writes:

Ooh. The flow of this sucked me up and placed me in it.. "and rocks of glitter. to sink me beautifully.." Awesome work, sweets.

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1133) writes:

Gorgeous, a breath takingly unique angle to write from. this really is perfect.. very lulling indeed. awesome work hon.

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, purr_verse (1438) writes:

this is gorgeous; the cadence compelling and gentle and utterly original. loved the feel of this from beginning to end. beautiful write! :)

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (26) writes:

you have a beautiful facination to your writing....loved reading this and will most likely read more..thanx ~UC~

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, anth (1610) writes:

really enjoyed this write,uniqueky fascinating,some lines really standing out

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (46) writes:

hmm.. i cant find words to comment on this, its on the tip of my tongue.. interesting piece, though!

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (58) writes:

nice wordings.

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:

thank you old, and i'll be reading your lovely stuff as well..

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

you're welcome.. and take your time.. they're not going anywhere :)

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

as June says... a unique read. And very much lulling.. soothing. I haven't had a chance to tell you yet... Welcome to DP. I'll be reading more of you. :::OLd

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, evolve (2221) writes:

Lulling, somehow...a brilliant write; I've never read anything like this...

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

i really liked this.. wonderfully written.

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