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And I Recieved You,
strands of ego flying out of your mouth..
(merciless and .. territorial)
I spoke of broken notes,
of cello strings and dimlit streets..
a rose found its way to your smile,
twisted and provocative..
pushing and pulling.
And Your Face Jerked Behind A Golden Glare,
(the trance you put me in.. the trance we found together..
no longer immaculate, no longer beautiful)
A crash of two stars..
colossal music created,
towering above me..
(hovering)
I watched,
fearing ... yet captivated..
for, what i could not control...
made me numb..
(thoughts of collapsing..dying, smothered in the earth..a pile of metal)
"i'm so sorry.."
Breathing to know..why
"I love You"
Yearning to trust..why
"But, We can't help this"
Breathing To Know..Why..
So many people crawl,
for fear our lives will end..
(crushed by men)
In a perfect dream I had one day,
I never lived to speak of the end..
(eye keep telling myself.. I've done this..)
A betrayal in the most loving way..
is still being gone.
" I loved You, Dont Regret Anything Please"
guns still shine as much as your eyes..
(Bright,Bright,Bright)
But.. I'd Breathe Forever In Shame,
to not have any regret..
to not smile through of falseness..in longing
for another day..
(another day)
...find me...



(the end of us)








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On Monday January 10th, 2005, K_Love (686) writes:
Beautiful piece, the ending was my favorite, reading your older works are quite different from your newer ones and you have grown as well. Captivating write, well done.


On Friday December 31st, 2004, blue (1756) writes:
I can't wait!!! ~b


On Friday December 31st, 2004, blue (1756) writes:
hmmm....pinky, this seems to be an escape...maybe a precursor to your style...it's still you, but different somehow...and of course a reference point for greatness! Big hugs! ...and protection? for you!!! ;) oh, I'm nearing the completion.. :):):) I can


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
and thank you deeply, from the bottom of my heart for every word you have spoken of my writings, you are too sweet. . too kind, and i'm grateful that you seem to genuinely love it all so much . . thank you, i say now. .


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
addict, if you're still watching this, i've dp mailed you. . one of the red icons on the left side of your screen should be lit up, its the 3rd one from the top.. .


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
so i've been reading you for a while, refraining from commenting, for the fear of my comment being an exercise in futility (that of exclaiming the beauty of your works). still, i've come to the point of selfishness... i want to talk to you. one on one.


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
you are beautiful... and if possible, i have fallen completely in love with you through only your (pale) reflection as glimpsed in poetry, what beauty, and i will not let that slip away.


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
is it possible, then, to understand someone (again, the futility... yet what then, should it be true?) of listening to one's words? i want to speak with you... please, if you've the time to spare, could i beg of you a reply?


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
colour_me_addicted@yahoo.com, if you've the time or inclination. and should you not... still, i wish you to know the ways in which you inspire me... your words are those which keep me from hiding my own.


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
there are those of us who love you so much, knowing so little of you... would that words (compliments) were of consequence, i'd offer you the stars. still, i hope you understand how much you mean to us.


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
would that you'd logged this evening, as i desire nothing greater than a conversation...still, i've your words as a form of (cheaper) comfort... beauty in itself takes varying forms... yet in your words, i find it constantly. ceci ve tal... je vous aime.


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
(please, do not underestimate the meaning behind my simple) thank you.


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
all the typical poetic compliments apply, and yet... so much more. you've inspired me again to live... and for that, i have only a "thank you." and so i offer thanks, and a heart wholly (poetically) dedicated to you.


On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
" I loved You, Dont Regret Anything Please" and "guns still shine as much as your eyes.." just took my breath away. everything ties into the title. and the title is incredible as well. damn...


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:
"A crash of two stars.. colossal music created, towering above me.." You have a way of describing things in the most delicate and subtle way, saying so much with so few words. This write was a perfect example of that, wonderfully done. ~Ryan


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (616) writes:
I'm not a fan of poetry about love or love lost, but I'm a fan of this poem. You use words like I've seen no other. This poem is heavy with perfect meter, and words that compliment each other perfectly. Beautiful work.


On Wednesday October 13th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
very good...nice title


On Monday October 4th, 2004, Solace (1421) writes:
This reminds me of the music of the stars and the universe and just how it feels to dance to them...Also reminds me of those last words before you break apart...from them...


On Monday October 4th, 2004, Solace (1421) writes:
Criticism muahahahaha...I want to see this in stanza's, drawn out, don't get me wrong its lovely beyond belief, but to have the reader taste it, savoring each line, all about presentation...


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, OLd SouL (834) writes:
*applauds* This is absolutely breathtaking... FANTASTIC work. :::OLd


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:
Now this is absolutely incredible, your best that I've read so far.. Some absolutely killer lines, like "I spoke of broken notes, of cello strings and dimlit streets.. a rose found its way to your smile twisted and provocative" I'm stunned..


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:
I think I might have to make some room on my favourites list, I'll read this over and over.


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (46) writes:
this is very heartwrenching for me.. i really like a lot of the lines, but i can relate a little for this, and i couldnt stop reading when i started.


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:
that was amazing work....like a head trip...it pulled me along and i wasn't always sure where i was going...i like that. welcome to DP!


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
nicely done.. some great lines!


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Too many beautiful lines to quote. Excellent title.. Excellent write, sweets.


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Ravenblade (274) writes:
very good write the lines"a rose found its way to your smile, twisted and provocative.. "really stood out to me...loved this from beginning to end, I could relate on a great level...>Raven<


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:
..."guns still shine as much as yours eyes"...damn. That line nailed this piece for me...and the title is superb.



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