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Of A Lover

A yellow foam of air,
it rains out stones and smiles
falsified ..
(hovering..taking us in)..
And dying eyes,
aging much faster than a
newborn caught in a glimmer of
holiday photographs..
"they grow too fast"..
Time stumbles on solid ground with
drunken intent..
Capturing the vivid effects of your eyes into mine..
your blue eyes, oh ..how they'll
shine..
when you open them (and your mind)..
realizing, I love you..
much more than any earth
could spin..
(spun, dazed..on the edge)..
Time, sipping wine..
naked in front of me..as though i am a
mirror..
and i need to wake ..
(mock me, recieve me)..
"they age, and so do we.."
Leave, But take me with you..
Breathe, But take me with you..
(Breathe..
I Love
The Sound
Of
Your
Frozen Words
As
You
Drift Into
Sleep...)
Open ovals surround my ears,
pulsing (i hear you sing)..
It all goes blank, when i look into your eyes..
dancing..repeating..
Ending, Without Finishing..

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On Saturday January 1st, 2005, AniDayz (1281) writes:

a*m*a*z*i*n*g....im dazzled....i need to read more of your works. you are i*n*c*r*e*d*i*b*l*e

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

"It all goes blank, when i look into your eyes.. dancing..repeating.. Ending, Without Finishing.." i dont usually quote when i comment. but with your writing i cant help it...its just flooring. im left amazed...i cant

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

believe i went without reading your work for so long. what a fool some can be...

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

This had a very soothing dreamlike feel to it. Beautiful. ~Ryan

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Rone4611 (157) writes:

Ending, Without Finishing.. - Gave me chills... happens a lot with ur stuff ;)

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

"I Love The Sound Of Your Frozen Words As You Drift Into Sleep.." Hmm love that line. Simply exquisite. =]

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (29) writes:

I think the last line is good. i just really liked it. This write, bedeviled me, hehehe.

On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, Lotophagi (451) writes:

so beautiful..... lovely stuff... thank you.

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

::smiles:: the words are dancing darling

On Monday September 27th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

They do grow too fast, them and us, us and them...The yellow foam, bitter words, drunken stumbling...Dreaming of worlds, of visions, portents...but only if you would grasp them...

On Monday September 27th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

Enraptured and entranced, you paint pictures with such loving tender brushstrokes, like walking on wires suspended above the earth...Like wandering through space at a thousand miles an hour, beautiful...

On Monday September 27th, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

and i thought I had to humor you...way to prove me wrong, cutie...heehee, I love it...please, feel free to whore to me anytime ^_~

On Monday September 27th, 2004, evolve (2228) writes:

Wow...I'm perplexed.

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