DarkPoetry -|- BeautifulCalamity -|- Antidote For Pain [pleasure of time]

Antidote For Pain [pleasure of time]

I Can't...
Be My Own, When In
My Mind I'm Divided Twice,
In Depth.. I'm Dulled
Like The Taste Of Cough.
If I've Been The Cause,
Then I Call The Cause To Be Released,
Forgotten...
Pushed And Punished.
Like Shades Of Transparent,
The Halves Of My Heart Have Been
Opened...
(Open, Like The Ocean.Forced.. And My
Stories Are Told To Travelers, Just Passing By.. Just Passing)
...Shamelessly, As Though They've Never
Seen Sun.. Bright, Constricting..
(Seen)
It's More Than Natural To Me,
It's The Way.. Sitting,
Internal Self Exposed.
Bleeding Through, But With No Where To Spread..
(My Touch Falls Short Of A Great Distance)
Nothing To Cling To,
(Hold Me Love, Comfort.. hurt)
No One To Feel For,
Finding..
I Stay Away From Verbiage That Infiltrates,
and Changes Form
Quickly..
Without Thought Or Remorse,
Until I Have Been Shown...
Showing In A Constant, That I Am..
I AM , I AM , I AM..
More Than Anything I've Ever Been..
I Am..

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on Antidote For Pain [pleasure of time]

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

"(Open, Like The Ocean.Forced..", "Bleeding Through, But With No Where To Spread.." stop playing with my mind...i love it;)

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:

This was very thought provoking and I can really relate to the idea of incompletedness and feeling like we are destined for more than this. Very nicely done. ~Ryan

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (29) writes:

Great, just great! All of it!

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:

You're such a unique writer... This is very elegant and graceful, I particularly love "(My Touch Falls Short Of A Great Distance)Nothing To Cling To, (Hold Me Love, Comfort.. hurt) No One To Feel For"

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:

You are very talented, but I would strongly suggest that you try writing without the caps to each word, it can be easier on the eyes, thus enhancing the feel of the piece. Wonderful work otherwise.

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (46) writes:

bitter, but wonderful all the while. i like it. nice write.

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

so bitter so wonderful. nice work, calamity

On Monday September 27th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

Just sweet and perfectly bitter...a nice contrast.

On Friday September 24th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

thank you a lot, i'm glad you liked it, and Capitals Are Always Fun! :>

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:

I Liked This. Now, I Must Say That I Don't Usually Like These Types Of Writings But This One Was Just So Honest That I Had To Like It. Thanks. PS: I Thought I Was The Only One Who Wrote With Capitals At The Begining Of Each Word. Cool! GPhD.

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/7182/46309 on Sunday November 23rd, 2008 08:27 AM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)