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Hearts , Broken

Space, You Saw Those Stars...
They Lit Up Your Eyes,
Your Face... Your Smile.
Hair Like Gold,
Spun Out Of Silk...
Your Form, Perfectly Matches To Mine (IN)
To Theirs...
Were You As Much To Them As To Me?
Time Talks (now,now)..
It Speaks Of
Rusted Verbs
And
Crushed Hopes..
Collapsing Over Your Drinks,
Through Your Poisons..
Drugged, And Your Crown..
Glistens Like The Halo Of A
Reborn..
From A Distance, I See The Shine..
The Glitter In The Center
Of Your
Eyes..
Up Close, I See Empty..
I Feel Hollow In Your Sight..

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On Sunday December 19th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

this left my heart aching, but more of an addictive ache. the kind i want to search out for the sake of feeling it again. what masochists us poets are eh?

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:

Damn, that is scary. That sounds just like me. I know how it feels. It sucks. Very well written.

On Saturday December 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

short and to the point, every line is eloquent and I can relate...Time speaks of rusted verbs and crushed hopes...amazing. great job

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, indefined (684) writes:

whoa. now this is really something, all the words and lines are well strung, the imagery i got from this was... surreal. yet oh so real.

On Saturday October 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:

the sweetness spoken by your lips,the essence spread by your breath, and yet even the sadness tucked in your eyes are well reflected in this poem.. beautiful just as you are this poem is.

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

so many lines in here i'd love to quote but i dont dare

On Monday September 27th, 2004, Solace (1421) writes:

Poisons, laudinum's, opiates of the flesh, of the heart...Inadequacy seeths...

On Monday September 27th, 2004, hate_doll (327) writes:

i read through this so quickly, just devouring it, then read it again...and again...I never get full...

On Monday September 27th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

"I feel hollow in your sight"....absolutely stunning conclusion, wonderful piece.

On Friday September 24th, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:

"The Glitter In The Center Of Your Eyes.." absolutely divine... although I believe it would be easier on the eyes, without the caps. Nontheless, this is truly beautiful, and delicate. very nice work.

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

I Think I Would Like This More If You Didn't Abuse your capitialazation ... in other reguards it was very good. :)

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