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Would it help if I told you your lips (friendly as they are to the poet)
make me st-st-stutter on paper?
Or should I suggest that Heaven be paved with pictures of your eyes instead of gold?

Perhaps a kiss on the small of your back?
A kiss that takes slow steps to find the sweetest spot
of flesh on the back of your neck.

You'd find my hands have ten close friends that might push themselves to places forbidden from most men.
All to make you smile, to shorten your breath.
It's hard to conjure dreams much better than that.

I'd steal your feet from under you,
handcuff each limb twice.
My mind gives me a helpful hint,
Would you prefer candle wax...or ice?

I'd pull your hair, drag my nails downs your spine,
p u s h the pleasure out your mouth, just to hear your
brandy brushed voice.

My thoughts are bright light in an empty white room.
You can't escape.
They surround you.

...Would you like to fall in love tonight?
I have a palace just your size.
It exists underneath my covers,
Where you'd be named queen.

Lists of wants await your words.
I'll shower you with fantasy.
Zig-zag's are unnessacary I'll b-line to the point.
Tonight is your night.
Anything you want.
Whatever you enjoy.

A poem a day with the title your name,
can make a man so anxious.
I'm craving you, and I've thought this through.
When we meet, I'll start with a kiss.





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On Monday April 28th, 2008, Miss Mars (380) writes:
this is awesome. -mars


On Sunday March 23rd, 2008, MGood (80) writes:
this is truly beautiful. ~M


On Tuesday August 21st, 2007, totaltrip (43) writes:
i love you. i love you. i love you. i want you. i want you. i want you. sigh. nice. nice. nice. you have me repeating myself to catch up with my thoughts.


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, me_the_messenger (174) writes:
can josh seduce you? yep, he can. lol. this poem is amazing. made me squirm in my seat... lovely. *messenger


On Monday March 19th, 2007, Carmina Gitana (115) writes:
I can't imagine any woman wouldn't love to read something like this - I love the lightness mixed in with the lust and the love. It's creamy and frothy at the same time.


On Thursday March 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:
i have to say, i've read this poem many times before, and it is still one of my favorites.


On Thursday December 14th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (109) writes:
whoa.....amazingly beautiful, one lucky girl and it's amzingly sexy also....:)


On Sunday April 2nd, 2006, Sin (1652) writes:
this is still one of the most sexy/sensual poems ive read...


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (902) writes:
"Zig-zag's are unnessacary I'll b-line to the point." yeah that's usually the problem....get lost on your way to the point for about na hour ok?..poem was alright i enjoy some of your other works better


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (902) writes:
simply that this is like...eh...for a topic to me right now...sorry i'm a little cynical and disintrested in gushy emotional heartstring attachment stuff right now. Nothing personal or anything.


On Tuesday September 6th, 2005, urbanhumility (1325) writes:
fucking brilliant......beautiful and sensual.............well done..........urban


On Tuesday September 6th, 2005, flying_fox (801) writes:
yes Yes YES!!!!! *whoo hoo* I'm off for a cold shower. I'm favouriting this one... luscious, sensual erotic... *melts in chair*


On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (33) writes:
Hell you can call me tonight lol so we can see wuts up lol


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:
Wow, very seductive, nice piece.


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, icyhott (46) writes:
what can i say that hasn't been said already? except call me your queen and i'll call you my god *hott*


On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, October Death (27) writes:
You can seduce me anyday. *Winks*


On Saturday May 14th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (209) writes:
Wow...Im seduced. lol. Nice work. ~Unlucky


On Saturday May 14th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:
Oh this sent excitement through me. This is very seductive!


On Saturday May 14th, 2005, Elise (270) writes:
*melts* I dunno what to say. Wow, I'm glad I found this.


On Monday April 4th, 2005, Northstar (462) writes:
wow--glad i stumbled onto this piece--captivating and sexy the entire way through--very saucy and seductive


On Monday April 4th, 2005, eastpatient (63) writes:
Very seductive. Very nicely written. And slightly dirty. I like.


On Thursday March 24th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:
simply lovely dearest enchanting -kitty


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1259) writes:
all I can say is WOW...


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, Twilight (2114) writes:
oh yes....josh could seduce me every day of the week. this is a fave...


On Monday January 10th, 2005, Sin (1652) writes:
this was beautiful, tender, and very sensual. who wouldnt want to be seduced like this? amazing dear ~kristy


On Sunday January 9th, 2005, Cinn (190) writes:
Yes, yes definately seduced. Wow. Amazing write. -Cinn


On Sunday December 26th, 2004, Astra Dei (649) writes:
wow.... a lovely and sultry write. very impressive


On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (588) writes:
and the very last stanza was perhaps the most lustrously loving I've read in awhile. .


On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (588) writes:
"I'd pull your hair, drag my nails downs your spine, p u s h the pleasure out your mouth", so many beautiful lines in this. . heartmelting but seductive as well. . you can have me :P ;)


On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:
*also seduced* awesome. id love to meet you.


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:
I agree with Liz. This was lustful yet gentle. I'm not even sure how to put it into words.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, Liz (413) writes:
Seduction is not love, as you suggest falling into. But between the skill of the poet and the skill of the lover, you make both seem possible to me.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, Liz (413) writes:
Erotica is rarely so heartfelt.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, Drea (976) writes:
Seductive indeed. This was heaven. The first line was genius. It give a girl thoughts that I almost forgot where there. For that...thank you, heh


On Monday December 6th, 2004, Atalanta (43) writes:
*very seduced*


On Monday December 6th, 2004, AniDayz (1297) writes:
WOW...


On Monday December 6th, 2004, Six-Out (1832) writes:
*seduced*


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Reverend (106) writes:
what he said. ;)


On Monday December 6th, 2004, Evil (552) writes:
ehem.. haha. i agree with solace on this one. awesomely written, and very seductive, as you implied. nicely done. well written.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, shortandpretentious (9) writes:
dirty... but wonderful


On Monday December 6th, 2004, island warrior (306) writes:
That would definitely seduce many women.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, elisa (1987) writes:
in the most poetic verse I can muster up......*clears throat twice* ......HOLY SHIT! I mean damn......and there's my comment:*) elisa


On Monday December 6th, 2004, elisa (1987) writes:
*clears throat for a third time*


On Monday December 6th, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:
Wow! I like ice... I can't wait to meet you josh! Fun Times Will Ensue! *grins*



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