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When People Become Allergies

The look on a little girl's face
forces me to reevaluate what I've said.
You know they're listening.
You know they're watching.

Like slugs they leave a ungrateful slime
Over everything that interests them.
Now I'm covered in slime,
and they dont want me any more.

I don't feel traped anymore.
I feel crusted in a castle of their snot.
They dont realize they're like allergies.
Just here at an inconvienient time.

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On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Drea (917) writes:

You have a style all your own. This was great. I love the title and the flow.

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

aweosome! ~I feel crusted in a castle of their snot~.. the lastline was brilliant.. truly a great write!

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, sIo (845) writes:

different but good.

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, batman nipples (2243) writes:

I could easily find the truth in this, as it brought a smile to my lips...a refreshing read, as always. I don't quite find it to be humorous so much as rich with thought. I could easily take this work into metaphorical wonderland. Thank you. =)

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Future of Despond (92) writes:

I like, especially the title.

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Violet (94) writes:

I can agree with the subject of this poem, moreso on my worst of days. I really like the slug analogy.

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

hahaha that is so true, wow that gave me a good laugh, we are truely just allergies! ~Finaldestiny~

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