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(honestly, im not sure why i even bothered to write this down, but i did, so here it is.)

Pretty little punk girl,
with pink hair and a pierced everything.
Interminably shrouded in cigarette smoke
seeping from vermilion lips.
Yeah, I said you're kinda hot.
So what?
Why should I get a life?
Or was it grow up?
Whatever the hell you said,
is that your typical reaction to flattery?
Damn.
Don't over analyze.
I didn't expect you to repay me
with deviant, deplorable sexual favors,
or some other sort of immoral behavior.
I'm already pleasure bound
in a faithful relationship.
And no one I've met so far
had the power to break that.
Not even you.
You're not that special Precious,
so don't flatter yourself.
As a matter of fact,
get over yourself.
Why don't you come down off your cloud
and join the rest of us.
It's really much more fun down here.
I swear.
Just try not to assume
that every dude
is trying to fuck you.
It's so much easier to simply smile,
say thank you,
and take it for what it is.
A friendly gesture,
nothing more.



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On Sunday September 10th, 2006, carlosjackal (1647) writes:
Excellent poem. I really loved it. 'nuff said!


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:
you bastard! Where the fuck are you.


On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, Cinn (188) writes:
Nice. Loved you're words in this. Very cool write. -Cinn


On Friday December 31st, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
Hah yah I know people like this. Loved this, glad you did write it down and put it up. ~Ship!


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (35) writes:
good write, i've known the type...but consider her point of view. some stranger thinks she's hot like her identity is tied up in her sexuality only, etc. Also, from the poem we can't tell "how " you said it, so your off scott free. context is everything.


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Liz (407) writes:
I agree. I'm still her, to an extent. Forget the image, but the attitude. A compliment is a compliment, but they're hard to distinguish from the rest, at times.


On Saturday December 11th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:
Even if you dont see the purpose... I am glad that you did write this down. Damn... how many people do I know like this!!! You hit this nail right on the head! ~sex~


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
my hair was green, and i always responded, "you're not too shabby yourself, sweetheart." if someone takes time to say something to make me feel good about myself, there is no need to be a brazen bitch for it. -zay


On Monday December 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
HAHAHA! I love this. I was a "sexy" little punk girl myself once, but I wasn't a bitch. This girl was probably just pushing you off to hide her own insecurities. I know I had blue hair and the "bad ass" wardrobe to hide myself.


On Sunday December 5th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
damn.. you just go, with your bad self!


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, Lotophagi (451) writes:
heh heh heh, crazy write, I love the attitude - and the short, effective jabbing lines perfectly emphasise the 'nature' of the punk girl..... Thank you.


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was so genuine it took my breath away.. i am so glad you wrote this... perfectly stated!


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
This was damn good...Well expressed through a witty dialogue...Well done...


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
oh god! this reminds me of some poeple i know, and u know what?! it's so true! if people would just come back down to Earth, finish up being "the shit," and stop being so full of themselves, it would make them so much happier, and conseqently it would mak


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
make the people around them happier as well. i hate being able to tell a persons whole outlook on life in one rude gesture. lol.


On Saturday December 4th, 2004, blue (1754) writes:
I absolutely agree with Sam. ..and this has happened to me as well. Right on brother! ~b


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
sweet....I could not agree more, I wish people would stop being so uptight and get over themselves.....of course then they would have to be happy and who wants that



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