DarkPoetry -|- stuart_pid -|- Descending Hallway of Fears

Apprehensive steps descend the corridor of fear.
The walls become alive with breath.
Imaginary terrors
inexplicably scream out to my subconscious.
Wrenching my soul.
Begging me to flee.

Pressing ahead against all better judgement,
I throw open the golden door
and step forward,
entering through,
into
enlightenment.

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On Saturday August 27th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

wow this is such a cool pic

On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, so_skeevy (77) writes:

That picture is perfect for the title.

On Tuesday March 1st, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:

wow..Love the picture, its fucking amazing. and a great write to go along with it!

On Thursday January 20th, 2005, SamoneDrone (407) writes:

wow! i love that this had a happy ending, and i love that the first stanza was exactly how i would verbalize a nightmare if i could. above all i was suprised and excited that it ended with enlightenment and not somthing stupid and petty like "suicide" (em

On Thursday January 20th, 2005, SamoneDrone (407) writes:

(emo) ha ha ha! nice work stuart_pid!.............................................................................................................-samone

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, shadowsinthelight (210) writes:

Nothing to fear but . . . dreams. The art reminds me of a nightmare. S.

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:

this is so damn confronting... the artwork in itself suffocates me, but the poetry - it perfectly evokes feelings of constriction, suffocation and panic.... awesome piece. Thank you.

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:

The pic fits the words wonderfully! "the walls become alive with breath" thats one hell of a line. I absolutely love it! ~sex~

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:

whoa.............

On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, Stormcomin (43) writes:

You have written this in a way that actually takes me into the picture, into the words...and into a state of awe. Excellent work!

On Monday November 15th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

i like this for reasons i can't explain...i love when i feel like that...sorry for the stupid comment, but i had to let you know I that like this...

On Monday November 8th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

This is exceptional, for lack of a better word.I love the picture . . . and the poem is outstanding. ~ Rose.

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

this was absolutely fantastic.. the pic fitted so beautifully with the depth of your perceptions... an amazing piece of work!

On Friday November 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

The poem is majestic and the picture is very impressive-love it

On Friday November 5th, 2004, StAinedNblood (43) writes:

The picture is awesome and so is the poem

On Friday November 5th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

This just rocks. I love the pic, and the poem to go with it. I could feel the feel for a minute, then joy.

On Friday November 5th, 2004, mysticventures (545) writes:

very cool !

On Friday November 5th, 2004, Storm (184) writes:

Nightmare.. this was different and great, and haunting. Very well done.. ~s

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