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"Her Beauty" by stuart_pid

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She walks within the nightmare
of her ever present past.
Devoured by a shadow
of the pain from which it's cast.
Bending at the fear
that stirs instinctively inside,
resonating softly
through the eyes she tries to hide.

The hand of understanding's
gentle touch has found her cold.
Distorted by the distance
that her desperation holds.
Running from the demons
in the darkness of her heart.
Keeping it together
as she slowly falls apart.

The horror of her story
is reflected on her face.
Her hollow stares of sorrow
and her soft seductive grace.
The subtle wash of tears
across the contours of her cheeks.
Expressions of discoloration
racing from defeat.

Over time the scars have faded
from the surface of her skin.
The pain remains, however,
still tormenting her within.
It pierces through my very nerves
caressing every thought.
I long to take it all away
but find that I cannot.

Her beauty isn't simply bound
by measures pre-defined.
It's deeper than the shallow standards
seared into our minds.
It's more than merely physical
attributes to the flesh.
While unapparent to the eyes
exquisite nonetheless.

Beneath her bridled misery,
behind her silent cries,
you'll find her fragile soul
and there is where her beauty lies.
It shines from every angle of her being
even though
how beautiful she is to me
she'll probably never know.



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On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
so elegantly expressed, a love poem that has substance and doesn't sound like a sappy love poem, well done


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
-side by running rapidly. Beautiful. ~ Rose.


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
"Beneath her bridled misery, behind her silent cries, you'll find her fragile soul and there is where her beauty lies" ~ your words are eloquent, graceful and utterly captivating, laden with an enchanting and alluring mist and I can only reach the other s


On Monday October 25th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
an absolutely elegant piece...seems carved out perfectly from the most sincere of emotions... i loved the 2nd and 2nd last stanza.. wonderful flow.. brilliant write! *bravo*


On Monday October 25th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
what a truly beautiful piece. the second-last stanza is absolutely gorgeous. And your metre/rhyme/cadence is just outstanding. wonderful write.


On Monday October 25th, 2004, ElegantKiss (401) writes:
This was emotional and beautiful. I really wish you'd write more. I always enjoy your the wording and concept you show. Brilliant write, sweets.


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:
damn, this is really good. alot of the emotions that u portray here remind me so much of the way i feel right now. great job! and btw... thanks for always commenting on my work! ~sex~


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
that was wonderful...once again, the flow and the rhyming only add to the overall feel of the piece...you have a talent for that...makes me want to start rhyming again...


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, elisa (2018) writes:
such a defining outline of Beauty...very Beautiful:) elisa


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, Clairvoyant (11) writes:
Epic. Beautiful and sad. I haven't been here long but this is the best poem I've read.


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
"The hand of understanding's gentle touch has found her cold" that's a powerful line for me, stuart, well put indeed. awesome write.


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:
beautiful....the ending was a door -macker: strong and sad...very nice work



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