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I AM LOST AND I AM FRIGHTENED,

I AM SHAMED AND ALL ALONE,

I AM WEAK AND I AM BEATEN,

I AM COLD AND HARD AS STONE,

TO GIVE UP ON LIFE,

MAY SEEM VERY BLUNT TO YOU,

BUT HONESTLY IF YOU WERE ME,

WHAT WOULD YOU DECIDE TO DO,

WHEN LIFE SEEMS LIKE,

TO MUCH TO TAKE,

AND ALL THERE IS,

IS A WORLD OF FAKE,

WHEN NO ONE EVEN CARES FOR YOU,

WHAT WOULD YOU DECIDE IS BEST TO DO,

TO END YOUR LIFE,

TO CONTINUE ON,

JUST TO PROVE,

YOU TOO BELONG,

BUT HAPPINESS,

JUST LEADS TO HATE,

AND HATE IS TRAPPED,

AMONGST MY FATE,

SO HERE I SIT,

AND CONTIMPLATE,

WHAT SHALL I DO,

TO LIFT THIS WEIGHT?





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On Saturday October 1st, 2005, the dried flower (82) writes:
when i read this poem i felt something, i think we share a feeling......good poem


On Thursday March 31st, 2005, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:
hey you.... dont ever decide to give up, on me, on life, on us....i could not live without knowing that you are by my side.....i know what i would do if i was you.........


On Thursday March 31st, 2005, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:
just know that i love you and shall for ever breathe ever last breathe at your side....love you baby


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
I enjoyed reading this, great job


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:
this is great. i really enjoyed reading your work!!! ~sex~


On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
i love ur work everything about this poem is beautiful and i can relate to alot of what u write.,ur beautiful and it shows this in ur poems!dont let anyone ever tell u different!


On Saturday May 24th, 2003, Ravenblade (274) writes:
Absolutely amazing. I loved the rhythm, the flow, the rhyme scheme, and the fast pace. It is awesome, I'm glad I chose to read this one. I chose it because I have a poem by the same title, so I wanted to see what yours was about. Great write.


On Saturday May 17th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:
I never contemplate suicide...it's only an occasional compulsion borne from unmanageable rage for me. So then...I bang away at my keyboard writing my poetry. ~DW~


On Saturday May 17th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:
I'm noticing that you have a way with carrying an inner beat with your work...it's neat. Rhyme went well also.


On Friday April 11th, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:
im speechless. your way with words, the rhymes, the truth, its beautiful and sinnful, yet magnifiscent.



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