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i take a knife and hold it close,
slowly but surly i cut my throat,
and before i know it i begin to cry
out pours the blood i begin to die,
but i am going now and won't be back,
the light is getting dimmer,
getting closer now to black,
i'm not afraid of darkness,
no not afraid to die,
but one thing i'm afraid of is that you are going to cry,
or even somthing dummer,
and decide that you should try,
try to follow with me,
end your life along with mine,
 its to late now, i'm getting weak,
its getting really dark, i fall down to my knees and die,
 i'm really truly sorry that i didn't say goodbye!
i wish that i could turn back time and
stop myself from suicide,
 




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On Friday January 28th, 2005, void (49) writes:
i can relate. there are too people i know would follow me. thats the only reason i'm here.


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
this is deep, but i can realte to it too -.cami


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:
wow... that was deep *JiNx*


On Monday June 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:
i thinnk that this is a poem that everybody can relate to at some point in their life. good job, you've written a universal truth.


On Friday May 28th, 2004, Kainoa (13) writes:
I used to feel that i needed to kill myself but then i'd think about my brother and change my mind because he looks up 2 me so-o much that he even calls me mom from time to time... great write ~*Katy*~


On Monday April 26th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (247) writes:
This also describes ht way I feel..Such powerfull words..-fairy


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (73) writes:
that describes the way i feel. i have thought about commiting sucide but never did cause i was scared about what my friends would do. ONly because when my boyfriend killed himself i tryed to too.


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, Forever Cold (50) writes:
well by the looks of it you really do not need my prais, but i must comment. it is a very gorgeous piece of work, and it hits a note with one who has tryed to turn back...well done.


On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (629) writes:
mmm it's the truth, another thing about suicude, if you screw up, it's just going to hurt a lot


On Saturday May 24th, 2003, wilted (273) writes:
this is great...the whole theme of the thing has so much meaning...and it flows really well. good job. _k


On Friday May 16th, 2003, Twilight (2114) writes:
i loved this. so meaningful and powerfully exhilarating. very good job.


On Friday May 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
Oh my gosh! That's EXACTLY the way I used to feel. I used to try to commit suicide all the time, mostly because of problems I'd rather not say...but I'd always think about my best friend and what he would do if I did it, so I stopped for his sake, because


On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:
i love the poem, but most of all i love you,so dont do this..............just let the WORDS flow.........not the blood!!!!!


On Monday May 5th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:
very well written, i loved it, but i do hope you keep writing and never do so, your writing would be greatly missed, thanks for sharing


On Thursday April 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (32) writes:
thats real good to keep in mind..I know for me personally when I get that low..keep writing good work..and when you get to feeling that way...throw it out on us..


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
oops...*work


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
good woek!



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