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I am helpless without you,
As my world falls apart,
The blood just keeps dripping,
From my crimson blood stained heart,
I understand within you,
Things you do not feel,
Love must be presant,
For fealings must be real,
But I do not understnad,
Why you didn't leave before,
And wasn't it just yesterday,
That you said those words once more,
Why you gave me false hope,
I guess I should have known,
I thought that you really loved me,
From all the things you've shown.



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On Thursday March 17th, 2005, steuss (144) writes:
This was touching. The rhyme and the flow drew me along quitely and then burst open the well of emotion. Well done!


On Monday October 11th, 2004, Goodnight_Moon (10) writes:
We all feel this way sometimes, and I've had enough relationships to know that if it's not deeply rooted, then it's best ot let go. Just let destiny take hold.


On Friday May 7th, 2004, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:
I really do love you and i am sorry if i have made you believe otherwise.....love Saint_Reaper


On Friday April 30th, 2004, boundandfallen (32) writes:
i apologize for this, but it feels unfinished. you could put so much more on this one. i like your poetry and webpage. lovely ones, who're too adorned.


On Saturday May 1st, 2004, Velvet_Raventon (697) writes:
Mmm I don't think so... I think the impression comes from the fact that the story itself is unfinished. It is very sad, and that sadness has been shown brilliantly in a few words... Velvet.



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