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Maybe I’m just paranoid,
But it seems he’s slipped away,
I know that I am jealous,
But it goes farther everyday,
He sits online and chats with them,
More than he talks to me,
Then when I get upset with him,
My pain he cannot see,
When he looks at other girls,
I wish that I would die,
For no longer am I good enough,
And inside I softly cry,
He is perfection in a bottle,
That only I could see,
Now they all to know,
And they’re trying to take him from me,
And knowing just my luck,
He’s sure to go away,
If he can have all them,
There’s no reason for him to stay……



Sorry I can’t trust you,
It’s not your fault at all,
Just the way my mind works,
Already prepared to fall……




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On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:
i love this....great write...sounds just like me


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (71) writes:
i am feeling the same way right now.


On Saturday August 16th, 2003, Saint_Reaper (284) writes:
i do see your pain, and you need to see mine


On Friday August 8th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
Don't let things like that bring you down. My main problem with relationships is that I let myself suffer over little things and I never stick up for myself if abused. You have to voice your feelings if it's jealousy or whatever.


On Friday August 8th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:
I like your poem the content is good...it seemed to me though that the rhyme was forced..I tend to stay away from rhyming stuff for that very reason...~


On Friday August 8th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:
Just remember hun, poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be great..it can be whatever we want it to be..~Velvet


On Friday August 8th, 2003, eternal despair (72) writes:
good poem, although also so sad... i hope things work out well.... nice write


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:
well... i dont know what to say that already hasnt been... keep it up... stick it out... youll get through it... nice piece


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
jelosy is something we all have, just that different people exprerince it in different levels. well done! {dia}


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:
wow...this poem is excellent...ive felt exactly this way before with an exgf...dude excellent job...the way you expressed yourself in this poem is...i dunno the word to describe it...but excellent job...keep it up...


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:
I too ahve had these feelings, i cant say it will all work out becasue i dont know if it will or not. I can tell you however to hold in there, and hopefully he will be true. Great poem. ~ap


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
i've had these feelings before, dont worry if the love and he are true it will work out nice write


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
This is a good write, and I think alot shares these feelings.. Monkey



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