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tear me apart

Tear me open,
Take a look inside,
Rip through the feelings,
I try so hard to hide,
Examine piece by piece,
My every single fear,
Search for explanation,
For every fallen tear,
Try to find the reasons,
I act the way I do,
Seeking the answers,
I wouldn?t show to you,
Explore so deep within me,
Pulling me apart,
Picking at the details,
In my crimson bleeding heart,
Probing for the cause,
Why I am the way I am,
Researching the reasons,
Why I cannot be like them...

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On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (85) writes:

Awesome read. Great flow!!

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Brenya Rose (190) writes:

very nice, I love the way the words flow so well together.

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I have to agree! I love it! I like the last line the best. Keep Writing

On Friday July 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:

awesome write, it's really amazing

On Friday July 25th, 2003, nell (328) writes:

this flowed so smoothly off my tongue reading it, great read=)

On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

This piece seems so natural. I should learn to expect that you'll continue to amaze me with your work. Thank you so much for posting. It's almost as if you're writing for me.

On Saturday July 19th, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

Bryana...hun great work...i love this...beautiful...

On Saturday July 19th, 2003, GothicBlack (268) writes:

yes, it paints a very beautiful picture, in deed. I like the way you did this. bravo bravo ~gothic~

On Friday July 18th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

WOW! Very Good I'm adding it to my fav's list. thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading more.

On Friday July 18th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

beautiful truly a look into your heart nice one

On Friday July 18th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

i do wish there was a transparency in ppl to see what they are all about..excellent job.

On Friday July 18th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

We are all individuals and this tells it in a very well painted picture. Great write.

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