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i know i would rather live

I am sick of fighting for a life,
That is not worth living,
Sick of searching for a god,
That is unforgiving,
Sick of trying every moment,
Just to find a better way,
Sick of dissapointing,
Every single day,
I am sick of hurting,
Too afraid to feel,
I am sick of crying,
When will this pain heal,
Sick of my complaining,
Why must I do the things I do,
I am sick of being,
When will my time be through,
I will not end my life,
There is a better way,
I will serve my time,
Until my final day,
I may be sick of life,
And all it has to give,
But as I think about it,
I know I'd rather live....

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On Thursday October 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (43) writes:

i liked this work its dark but it shows thiers hope good job

On Friday October 24th, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

::silently agrees::

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Frustration - introspection - hope. Inspiring!

On Friday July 18th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Quick. Good. Nice. Ciao. GPhD.

On Monday July 14th, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:

very flawless.openly emotional and deep. well done.

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

Wow, such an amazing poem. You pain and emotion is truly clear in this poem. I loved it!

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, GothicBlack (268) writes:

yes strength is defiantly shown through this piece, that and incredible wisdom. an enjoyable hopeless poem with undertones of peace. *and that’s something that isn’t easy to pull off.* bravo, bravo. ~gothic~

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

Endurance is strength and apparently you have it is great quantities. When the race ends, and you catch your breath… I hope you realize how wonderfully strong this work proclaims you to be. This is a wonderful and a great read. ~DW~

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

I'm glad you can reflect on the positive point of view peeking through your sulking thoughts. Living is extremely underestimated by almost everyone. Thank you for portraying a bit of that!

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, celestine_moon (53) writes:

cool. i like the flow and very much relate to the topic. well written and gives a feeling of goddammit, fuck the world, if i'm stuck with it, its stuck with me! great job! -moon

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:

Yupyup,i also love it.

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

love this!

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:

*nods*

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, nell (328) writes:

i like the end, it gives a good message to those who feel the same as you=)

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (9) writes:

This is a Vary good poem i will have to show my g/f this one she will love it

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