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A cold and shameful tear,
Falls wearily from her eyes,
She never knew it would hurt so bad,
This was a pain of great surprise,
It started with a simple kiss,
But grew to be much more,
And then before she new it,
He was walking out the door,
They shared so many memories,
She thought they'd always be,
But everything to happen,
All to come, she couldn't see,
Couldn't see the bruises,
Or all the little fights,
Couldn't even imagine,
All the crying nights,
Everyone had warned her,
What she couldn't see,
People told her not to go,
For something that shouldn't be,
But still she wouldn't turn away,
From the boy she came to love,
She dreamed he was an angel,
God's gift from up above,
But after all thats happened,
She has realized she was wrong,
And after all the warnings,
She should have seen it all along,
A cold and shamful tear,
Falls wearily from her eyes,
As slowly but surly,
She starts to realize,
The love that they once had,
Wasn't worth the pain,
The fealing of self-worthlessness,
The heartbreak and the shame...



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On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, SluG (55) writes:
Your poetry just seems to flow, awesome talent you seemed to have tapped into my friend...keep this up and you will make alot of people happy -S.


On Friday July 25th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:
stunning. your rymth and rhyme were excellent and unfortunately, i too can relate.... and even more unfortunate, he still holds my entire heart in his hands...


On Friday July 18th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
I love this it will be added to my fav's. I know how this goes to well. People tell u not to get involved but u can't help it. U have to find out, I'm glade u realized that it wasn't worth it.


On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:
This has happen to me as I well. I totally feel your pain in this one and trust me, you are not alone.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
I loved it. I think we all need to realize thatit happens everyday and I give you major props. Good Write.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
They say love is blind... It's a pity that I can relate, but misery loves company so thank you for that. An excellent piece of warning for the foolish. Nice work alone.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Recycled (161) writes:
Hopefully this was not something you had to go through. Great write either way.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:
i loved this!!!!!! >.< i know the entire feeling... but im on the verge of falling back in love with him... so i guess ill be ok.. <3Dommi


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Deeter (30) writes:
this gives a sense of waining just ever so slightly, reminding me of course of personal things that are far too close to heart... but better left forgotten. An all around good read, thank you =)


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
Nicely done. Eloquently and sincerely put.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Pollywog (10) writes:
Wow. That is deep. It left me feeling empty. I love it.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, GothicBlack (266) writes:
this flowed so nice, like the tear down her cheek. the rhythm and poem left me speechless. The room seems calm and silent now..... ~gothic~


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:
I know this....are you reading my mind...this happend to me about a year ago...all of it...i think iam going ot cry...that was great...thanks Bryana!!


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
i too went through something like this and i love this write


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Crying_Banshee (74) writes:
I think we all went through similar stuff =/ unfortunately... nice poem anyway...mutilated archangel



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