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One last wish...

If on this cruel and unjust planet,
Tomorrow I should die,
I shall have just one last wish,
And then forever I shall fly,
I shall wish not to comfort me,
But to save you from your fears,
To always make you happy,
And to stop all of your tears,
If tomorrow is my last day,
And I stand before the lord,
I will give him all I can,
Everything I can afford,
When he asks me what I want,
I’ll give my wish away,
For you to live your life,
Content and happy everyday,
So here I stand with one last wish,
To end my pain filled mind,
I wish for all your happiness,
And for life to treat you kind!

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On Sunday March 20th, 2005, so_skeevy (77) writes:

God i love that i totally know what you mean

On Friday August 8th, 2003, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:

i love you baby, and i am sorry for n e thing that i have to done or said hurt you.....i ♥ you more than life it self, oh yeah, i am putting your poem on my favs.....love ya!

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

This is very good! I think everyone wants that for the people they leave behind.

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

I can relate a hundred percent in this poem. Now I know exactly why I added you to my favorites list...

On Thursday June 26th, 2003, The_Scavenger (32) writes:

Great write. I loved the use of words and how it was just bursting with emotions. I so wish i could find the words... Keep up the good work

On Thursday May 29th, 2003, Rachel (393) writes:

Lovely.

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

Oh Bryana!!! :::picks self up off floor::: This is Beatiful! It is completly and totally one of my favs now...when I got to the end...I thought "this is what I want read at my funeral"...Wow...~DW~

On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

I love it a always..your writting is very enjoyable to read

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:

Hmmm, nice little twist there at the end, not what I expected, but wonderful.

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

love the ending .. thought it was going to round off into some kind of creepy blow my brains out on fifth avenue ending .. but instead, it twisted into something a little more brilliant. something worth to comment for. D&A

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:

I dig it, very much so...great write, my darling alone...(!)

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (17) writes:

i really needed to read something like this today, it has true meaning and heartfelt words...it reminds me that there are people happier than me :) ~saint~

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, Ravenblade (274) writes:

Very good, I like the whole concept of after being dead the things to be done. I liked the flow it had, kinda slow, but good. Definately good work

On Tuesday June 17th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

i really like this one... well written, good content, solid indeed

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