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Too Many (To Follow)

Sails upon silent water,
I watch you play below;
But if I raised my head,
my ocean is dead, and -
all my stars are named!

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On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Solace (1400) writes:

Freakishly fantastic, this is an awesome epitaph to be seriously considered - its one of those rare times I can hear and see and feel the words - I cannot say enough for this, its your best when you do this...

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Solace (1400) writes:

I think I might be looking down into the water and missing all the stars...fathomless depths...

On Monday March 17th, 2008, Solace (1400) writes:

Still my favourite of yours, outside of the obvious Nadir bounds. Theres something about it that eats at me, that just sticks and won't let go. Miss you man, wish i had of been rich enough to see you in Europe.

On Saturday June 28th, 2008, Nadir (615) writes:

Tell me the next time you are near Denmark. I would just drink up my cash anyway, or spend it on going to koncerts ;)

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Nuri (188) writes:

There's too many (to follow) in such a concise piece. Delight delight delight then "my ocean is dead, and- all my stars are named" Depressing!

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Aurora_Light (575) writes:

short, sweet, well done

On Monday May 14th, 2007, Zen (602) writes:

liked

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