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Blackness seem piercing on unhealthy white,
and in-between no confidentiality of blood;
An ocean stand divided by empty ships,
controled by young and elder lips,
But did we not float? it was I,
that brought aboard the gun,
I, but what sacrifice?
that this thought is not to bear;

A moment before resignation,
no one shall deem us destructive,
portray a grand collapse;
No we all reach to embrace in the end.



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On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Solace (1400) writes:
Its the words that fail me, you see they never say enough of what I feel, muted what expression can I give but the barest one, but the compliments of a man that lives within words, what could i possibly give in return


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Solace (1400) writes:
in return for all your services, whether aware or unaware of them, nonetheless i feel indebted...i've nothing of worth but words...and i'm yet to figure if i have any with enough worth...


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Solace (1400) writes:
I will repay you some day my friend, whether your realise it or not in my own way I shall pay homage to all that I have taken from you...Thank You


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Storm (184) writes:
"No one shall deem us destructive" Don't know why but you almost make me want to see Titanic... *shudders* What can I say, you did it again Tiger. ~


On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
Thats great, I didnt think of that. Made me laugh too ^^ Sad eyes and laughs, thats how it goes.


On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, Drea (917) writes:
I think anth sumed up how I felt about this. You have a gift for not over doing it with words. You say what needs to be said to get your point across. Your words are amazing. This was....just very well done.


On Monday December 27th, 2004, blue (1701) writes:
My god...that was a beautiful write! Well done indeed! ~b


On Monday December 27th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
wonderful. A_C


On Monday December 27th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
this is a great write, i felt like i was just dropped into a heated scene of a film,theres a skill in what you leave out, and how you present your works, i enjoyed delving into this


On Monday December 27th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
yes, i completely agree. lovely.



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