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I am about to give myself
To the man I love
This is my first time
Will it hurt?
How much will I bleed?
Will he still love me afterwards?
I am so scared
Will my body be thought of as ugly?
Will I not kiss him right?
Oh, fuck it!
The inexperience and awkwardness of it all!
I know that I can't go wrong
If I just give him my love


**This is pretty much how I felt when I lost my virginity. Sadly, the guy doesn't want to talk to me anymore**


Copyright 2004 Atalanta

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On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
nice write sweetie, guy must be an idiot to give up on a beautiful person like yourself. i like the simplicity of the racing thoughts... the questioning.. well done


On Friday November 12th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:
we truely all are like that .. fuck us men .. not litturaly


On Friday November 12th, 2004, Rone4611 (157) writes:
very pretty. like how it's layed out.. or laid out... get it ...laid... sorry. and i agree with devon if it was givin in love it shoulda been treasured. good write


On Friday November 12th, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
the first time is not the "messure" darlin........you will inherit the best of memories still...............well done........urban


On Friday November 12th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
The honesty of this gives the slightest sting. I like how you did this.. very well done.


On Friday November 12th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:
Then the guy is a fool neh? anything given in love, even a kiss on the cheek is special and should be treasured. good write. Devon


On Friday November 12th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:
I wish my first time had been in love...



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