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My Love My Love

You love me even though you really do not know me
Even though you have not seen my face
You made me feel beautiful
Even though I know I am not
You were there for me
Even when I was sure that I would die

My love for you is strong
It carries me through the dark
Loving you kept me alive
When I was sure the fight for my life
Would be in vain
Your beautiful face was in my mind as I slowly slipped away

Now I am alive
And not so well
I am terribly weak and forlorn
But it is thanks to you
For loving me even in the face of death
Even when I knew that I might die

**This is written for Daemonicus. When I was shot, my aunt contacted him. His love carried me through the worst. Now I am on the mend, but my strength sometimes fails me. So DP population, thanks for your support and get well soon's. Deamon, I love you. Thank you for everything.*

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On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

Emotional, touching, and just absolutely fantastic..I'm so glad Atalanta's profile has been kept here on DP so that her poetry can still be enjoyed even after her passing. May her spirit live on.

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, island warrior (303) writes:

How beautiful.

On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:

i'm happy to know you're ok now, wonderful write and tribute as well.. sweet and admiring. beatiful

On Tuesday November 23rd, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

I am also glad that u are ok. The words here are so full of beauty. A wonderful dedication for a wonderful soul! ~sex~

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

oh man, this is beautiful. and demon deserves every word. and im so gla dyour ok now...*hugs* i had no idea..im glad your back too:)

On Friday November 19th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:

Very sweet tribute. Ciao, T/S

On Friday November 12th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

a beautiful tribute to a beautiful soul. Daemon, you deserve this so absolutely; Atalanta, this is a lovely poem. I wish you all the best of things.

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

i can't express the feeling i had when i clicked to open the email from Echo that told me you would be ok... just as i clicked i closed my eyes, because i realised it would either bring one kind of news or another... then to read the good news.. i'm so gl

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

i'm so glad you're ok. thank you so much for this poem, it is soft and of simple beauty. thank you. get well soon darling, i love you *hugs* :)

On Thursday November 18th, 2004, Atalanta (43) writes:

If anyone deserves this, it is you. My dear, you are beautiful on the inside as well as the out.

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

That would scare the crap out of me. Daemonicus is a great guy. He knows how to make someone feel better and feel loved. Wonderful tribute, Atlanta

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:

This is just beautiful . . "Your beautiful face was in my mind as I slowly slipped away". I can feel this tugging at my heart. *curtseys* . . very wonderful indeed. I am impressed, and I feel a tear swelling. ~ Rose.

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (90) writes:

Oh wow, absolutely beautiful. *smiles and welcomes you warmly to the dp home* It is sure to be a wonderful stay here for you as well. ~Tracy

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, NikesRain (1503) writes:

a very touching and heartfelt write. Best to you and to the sweetest of demons ;) he's definitely a rare and precious one.

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

A shome noone commented on this. I saw lots of emotion .. And I like it. now go send him a mail telling him about this write :O) *dances*

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

Ohh.. And a big warm wellcome to our midts

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