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"A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

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synthetic theoretical hypothetical bullshit


hypodermically injected directly
into your head
uttering guttural moans
as the rusty syringe
passes through flesh and bone

straight to your brain...
from behind your ear...
so you won't feel the pain...
there's nothing to fear...

held by the hand of someone
who demands your respect
but neglects to inject
that little piece of information

strapped down
to the table
but still not so stable
stripped of everything but
the clothes on your back

bright lights make the
white walls brighter

blinding and binding

with your eyelids taped to your forehead

before you t.v. screens
flash scenes of violence
obscene phrases replace the silence

their manufactured do(s) and don't(s)
assimilate your predetermined shouldn't(s) and won't(s)

on the surface the same person
but beneath the layers of regularity
resides a "brand new" you...

...and then they inject you
back into your could-have-been life

straight to your brain...
from behind your ear...
so you won't feel the pain...
so you won't feel the fear...



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On Friday September 26th, 2008, bloody LOVEly (112) writes:
isnt that the absolute worst endless cycle? nice work, it's got a great beat.


On Monday March 13th, 2006, AHHH (239) writes:
absolutely amazing. well done. well done.


On Thursday March 3rd, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
"...and then they inject you back into your could-have-been life" Yep, still amazing. *love*


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Sin (1623) writes:
~their manufactured do(s) and don't(s) assimilate your predetermined shouldn't(s) and won't(s)~ wow this floored me, you are amazing ~kristy


On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, Raven (373) writes:
scenes of violence... "brand new" you...eyelids taped to your forehead...That's it. You're a favourite now... *grins* welcome to the list..._Raven


On Monday October 4th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:
Woohoo this kicked ass. Glad to see you writing again!


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
very interested piece. i could actually feel something prying behind my ear....gives me chills. well done.


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:
ahhhhh a little bit of the ultraviolence perhaps.....nicely done


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
somehow this all rang with familiarity to me - imagine that :) - awsome write and glad to read you again!!!


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, purr_verse (1427) writes:
excellent! damn fine to see you back, and this is a fantastic write - the rhythmshifts are great and really well done; love the ominous feeling of the ending too. great stuff. :)


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, FallenFaith (47) writes:
and i thought i was abducted by aliens. no really this is really nice work, raw and uncut, readable at the same time


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:
WOW... This is great. It is so clear what is going on but so hidden as well. It holds a great concept and I really can relate to this thought of society but maybe not quite so delicately.


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:
Also... the title caught my attention and I am so glad you didn't let me down with this. Some people get great titles and there work just ruins it all, but obviously not in your case. Amazing insight! Bethany


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
the title is awesome... and you are so right!


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
this was simply profound..i am so glad you're back!:)


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, lordshadow (211) writes:
glad to be back. but you're too nice. thanks for the words.


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
Bhairav*


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
::eyes widen:: i'm with Bhairave here, damn...


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (25) writes:
wowwwwww...in-friggin-credible write....glad i found your warks..and will be reading more


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, lordshadow (211) writes:
...and I will be reading yours as well. thank you.



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