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Between us lays a minefield
I'm careful where I walk
You stand there staring back at me
But I only wish to talk

With every step a spoken word
Attempts to minimize
The distance put between two friends
Between two sets of eyes

The first one, mine, so full of hope
That I can help you heal
The other, yours, so full of pain
I never want to feel

Footprints left, impressions made
And still your face so cold
I shout your name, you won't respond
This is growing old

I take my time; can't walk too fast
And careful where I tread
For every pace could be my last
And then we'll both be dead

So close, now, I want to run
Instead, my hand extends
Just inches, now, away and then
So suddenly it ends

A lukewarm grin, a single tear
A bittersweet embrace
A single step, a single word
To take us from this place

Before we left, I heard you say
With a single sorry sigh
As you wrapped your arms around me tight
And simply said, "goodbye."



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On Tuesday June 5th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (443) writes:
rhymed and flowed so well, this poem is just wonderful, beautiful, and sad. just loved it.


On Thursday March 3rd, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Sweet boy, you break my heart. Each beat painful and still just as beautiful.. love you.


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, missanthropic (48) writes:
chimerical content, magnificent metaphor, fabulous flow and a rabid rhythm...this is one of my favorite works...thank you kindly *curtseys*


On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, Nightingale (555) writes:
Whoa. The flow, the rhythm, the words... this is stunning. And I'd have never found it if not for the Random button.


On Thursday September 16th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
This is so beautiful & very well written. I love reading your works :)


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
just beautiful man, excellent wordmanship and meaning, just beautiful!



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