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"Hate (what does it mean to you?)" by lordshadow

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take this piece of paper pale
and write down all your sorry tales
so we can feel the same as you

and see it through your eyes
so that we can all despise...

...all the things you hate so much
and all the love you fear to touch
and show us your emotions true

so we can know "real pain"
and hope to feel the rain...

...of every salty drop you cry
help us not to wonder why
you sob each night, yet shed so few

and collect them in a cup
so that they won't dry up...

...but still they will evaporate
like all the things you love to Hate
replaced with others; shiny, new

and when these words are lost
you'll realize Hate's true cost



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On Monday January 30th, 2006, Vexed (104) writes:
sounds like someone who would actually care to hear how other people are feeling, unless it is finding out what makes them tick...


On Tuesday November 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
Nice, I like this alot .


On Saturday October 23rd, 2004, Ideas (56) writes:
Whoa... I read this twice, and still, words fail me... I love it


On Sunday October 17th, 2004, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
This was.. wow. I love your angle on things. You have such a great grasp on observing and then putting things to words. You write differently than most. I adore it.


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:
I think this is my favorite poem by you so far :)


On Friday September 3rd, 2004, purr_verse (1427) writes:
and another example from you of excellent metre and a real natural feel for cadence. :) the second-last stanza is my favourite here; strong message in this one too. fine write!


On Friday September 3rd, 2004, Sleepwalker (23) writes:
I love the last two lines...so true


On Friday September 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:
lovin it man im lovin it yet again you over shadow me great write ~Ends


On Friday September 3rd, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:
If I am understanding this correctly someone has been reading to much poetry on this website. but I must agree with you I'm pretty shure allmost everyone on this site is an intellectual sadomasochist


On Friday September 3rd, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:
and there is nothing wrong with that really



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