Cool, this one is creative too. I like how you shaped things out and yet it didn't sway you from the perfect play on words.

what a fall into the void...i think i like it here *laughs maniacally*...no, that was bleeping awesome. -zay

What a trip into a nightmare more than a few of us have had. This is superbly creative, more so than most. -END-

Oh...and please keep posting more of these forever.thankyou.:)

that is godamn awesome, take a bow.

I can add nothing.Perfection.Awe inspiring.

Wow, I'm honored. A comment like that from you is no small gesture. I will certainly do my best to create more of these poems. And to everybody else that has commented thank you for your support. It means a lot to me.

wow that one was really good Nes! Great infact.... -JiNx(ie)

i really liked what you did here.. lending a concrete form to words.. wonderfully done, again! great job!

I like the format of it especially, how it's shaped, I haven't seen Concrete Noose yet, but I'm about to go see. Nice job!

Yeah.. Ive been waiting for this.. awesome.. I like the designs for this and Noose.. very creative.. sometime I may try one.. excellent work Elizabeth.. -Michael

nicely done, very creative. liked the use of certain words to get through.i wonder if this comment made any sense, loved it either way

Intense and impressive. -Glass

I'll mark this as a fave too. People ought to try more of these poems in weird shapes. What shape are you in? Well rounded? A square? Or just bad? :) ~Shane~

AWESOME.