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On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Elise (263) writes:
Wow, thats very creative. I love the play on words. Great job.


On Sunday January 30th, 2005, Lydia Jade (784) writes:
fucking brilliant!!


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
wow...this is as kool as the concrete coffin. -zay


On Monday November 15th, 2004, Sin (1623) writes:
wonderfully done, very imaginative ~kristy


On Friday November 12th, 2004, indefined (684) writes:
fucking jesus holy...


On Friday November 12th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:
Holy fucking Jesus...


On Thursday November 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
I like this one also, since I just got done checking out Concrete Coffin (im so stupid, maybe next time I'll see the FIRST one before seeing the SECOND one). I really like both of these, I love how you formatted them.


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (83) writes:
kick azz! i love the way it is put. but it took me a sec to figure it out.


On Saturday October 16th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
very cool imagery....i used to do stuff like this...


On Friday October 15th, 2004, MGood (77) writes:
This kicks ass!!! ~Mary


On Wednesday October 13th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
lol this is kinda cute^-^~ss


On Wednesday October 13th, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:
haha.. ya this was a great design and concept.. very cool Elizabeth. -Michael


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (488) writes:
coolness... ~sex~


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
damn...i really like this


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Killer.


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple (49) writes:
very well done


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
I've just seen this, & really like it. People ought to do more of these "concrete shape" poems, so I applaud you for this one. :)


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
this was really interesting.. i like the way you did this! :)



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