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              so far.. Off the wrong path.
           So firmly compressed in the darkness.
              and yet still being optimistic.
              So i'll somehow survive this.
          Why is it. so hard. to find serenity.
                 In This Empty valley.


            Looking. in the wrong direction.
             Keep walking. off the wrong path.
                      so far away.
           i'll never end up on the right track.
                And someday i'll walk away,
                  With my head held high.
             and be able to say goodbye to you.
               Maybe were better of this way.



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On Friday May 27th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:
Heh second stanza kicked me in the teeth. I know exactly how this goes. Very sweet. ~Ship!


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Leigh (24) writes:
This IS painful, but seems to come from the heart, thank you.


On Friday May 20th, 2005, Northstar (454) writes:
i can so relate to this piece right now--well done


On Friday May 20th, 2005, Kaja (28) writes:
Oh my gosh, I can relate to this so strongly it is almost painful. It's like you took the words from within. Loved it, thankyou.


On Friday May 20th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:
this is awesome!!! yay! ^_^ keep the good ones flowing hun


On Friday May 20th, 2005, Grim_Sorrow (87) writes:
Good Write... Impressive... Keep it Up


On Friday May 20th, 2005, Lab Rat (325) writes:
hhmmmm stand strong. I like this work, nice job



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