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Broken Soul Forgotten Eyes- Another Piece OF Mind.

                These thoughts I write.
                Another Piece of Mind.
             All the confusion in my life.
                  I'm Dead Inside.
                   Cold Hearted.
                   Cold Blooded.
            Broken soul Forgotten Eyes.
                  Shattered Smile.

           Empty Reality, full of hate.
        Nothing to give, Everything to take.
  I dream these dreams and sometimes it feels as if
                  I wont awake.
     I wish someone else could take my place.

           My life is a constant tragedy.
            The hatred tangled up inside.
            Darkness overwhelms my mind.

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On Saturday April 30th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:

fabulously written, and i can entirely relate as well..yet again

On Friday October 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

just had to read this again...

On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:

very intense write, powerful and sad. makes me want to give you a hug.

On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Damn girl, we must be of the same blood...I've written almost these exact words myself... you're not alone...even if you feel you are

On Monday October 25th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

this conveyed so much... lovely work!

On Monday October 25th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

_this was cold...full of sorrow...utterly hopeless.

On Monday October 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

Excellent write. I loved it.

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