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                  I can see inside you fine..
                  The hate you hold inside.
                I can read between the lines.
               If you don't want me in your life
                     just tell me to go
                             A
                            W
                             A
                            Y
                             !
                            !
    
                 
I can see it in your eyes.
                 I'm not completely blind.
 make me feel guilty to the obligation you hold inside for me.



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On Saturday April 30th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:
this is a feeling i know as well..


On Monday October 25th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
the bitterness was portrayed wonderfully here...nicely done...


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
_this had the feel of swallowing razorblades...inner pain well represented...nice one,WW.;)


On Sunday October 24th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
reading between the lines is a useful skill to have :)


On Saturday October 23rd, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:
That was really good. I ran relate. I loved how you did the the "Away". I thought that was cool.


On Saturday October 23rd, 2004, SilentKnight485 (55) writes:
can*


On Saturday October 23rd, 2004, Trapped_with_Insanity (131) writes:
Thought provoking...



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