DarkPoetry -|- thinevoicetragic -|- A love that was never there.

A love that was never there.

In your eyes I lost my soul,
          now it feels as if I am no longer full.
           Empty inside No way to fill the void.
    Feels as if there is no one worthy to share my love.
Nothing good can come of this seems as if I am barring a
                      weekness.

                 Betrayed and Cheated.
                 comstantly Incompleted.
                          A
               Love that was never there.
                           A
                 Lover that never cared.

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On Saturday October 9th, 2004, indefined (684) writes:

those first three lines crushed me. been here... i'm still trying to find my way out. extraodinarily put, well written indeed.

On Saturday October 9th, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:

What a lonely feeling.. beautifully expressed.. -Michael

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, blbhd (44) writes:

i realy tuely feel what your saying. I ve been going through alot and feel the same

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_fuck...so lonely...sometimes we feel like happiness is a ship that already set sail. all you can do is watch it fade into the horizon...and hope beyond hope that another ship will come along...nice,Meg...i think your ship will come.

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

sweet temporary tragic .. tragic ... dug the ending run ,... catchy and complete .... funguy

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, Krusifire (15) writes:

Nice poem...I've felt this way alot. ~Fire~

On Monday October 4th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

this was so sad.. very well written..

On Monday October 4th, 2004, elisa (1990) writes:

oh sweetie, this just hurts to read from you...you have such a way of expressing yourself...it's been to long since we've talked:( elisa

On Monday October 4th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

these feelings are all too often felt. great write

On Monday October 4th, 2004, Revolting Theatre (36) writes:

nice write "Betrayed and Cheated." -ain't that always the case...-Josh

On Monday October 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (11) writes:

breath taking....i think that everyone must feel this from time to time...unless the have invented some kind of brain surgery that prevented you from feeling...wouldnt that be great

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