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More Dead Then Alive

     Buoyant lies, Heart filled with spite.

                Your words Poisoned my mind.

      Creeping threw this world one step at a time.

            seems i'm more dead then allive.

           I'll Always live in the darkness.

              I'll never find the light.

                  Wallowing in Pain.

               Stumbleing to find my way.

             Stuck in this never ending day.

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On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

This seems like it should be set to music. Well done, good rhythm. I can relate to the sentiment quite well. -Michael

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

I think someone needs a nice loving hug.. Cheer up dear. Pretty write though, and I like the colour RED. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, DoctorAsh (507) writes:

This would make for some good lyrics -Good Job shibby barn-tackular.

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:

i know the feeling.

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