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No tomorrow

  so i've told you how I felt.
        when I see you my heart continues to melt.
       My love for you constantly grows threw out.
                       My heart,
                       My soul.

                    I have no control.
                 Over this exceeding floe.

                     I need to forgo.
                  This constant shadow.
                This domineering sorrow.
                 I look out the window.
    To me it seems as if there will be no tomorrow.

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On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:

you know i love it great write as usual dear lady ~Ends

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I have been here before also, who hasn't...lol Hang in there, things have to be rough before they can be better.

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, elisa (2017) writes:

I too live in land of limbo waiting for someone to wake me in tomorrow... beautifully said:) elisa

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

_i've been down this road before...too many times...love is a dog from hell.nice,yummy.;)

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:

Good write, i can relate to this, and im sure many others can as well...

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, Roadkill (45) writes:

I know what its like to have had these for someone ... and i will again someday very well put

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, Choronzon (233) writes:

I like the concept and it is presented rather well, but please check your spelling.

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:

very nice. great rhyme scheme. i feel the same way about someone! wonderfully done! ~sex~

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